Woah.

This is beautiful.

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Amazing. A wonderful tribute to the veterans that fought for our future. Lest We Forget.

...in port. she looked...

Ate a capital letter there. Only pointing it out because I would also like such an error to be pointed out to me if found in my texts as well.
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Given the details provided about the locations, I take you've been or even lived there. Great writing, mixing in details adds a lot of credibility and immersion.
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Bloody great writing, mate. Not sure if Kay is canonically half-american (might be), but even if she isn't, I took my liberties with the nationality of the characters in my fic, so I can't hold it against you.

A pity her father fell for - and some might hold this opinion against me - an illegal and unnecessary war. You know, with Britain part of the coalition of the willing, I think you've just inspired my next chapter, mate. Thanks.

Beautiful. My Grandfather was in many branches through his life. This reminds me too much. Tear jerker, but in a good way. Thank you...

That had me tearing up. My brother and cousin are military and The Lord has kept them safe. We will never forget the sacrifices made by our armed forces.

This was a touching story, hope you do more

No man, hath greater love than this:
than to lay down one's lif for one's friend.

Happy rememberance sunday

Aww, Happy Vets day. This is sad...