It was amazing! Please can you do an update though?

Hate it

i miss this show and these characters. I find it unimaginable that i am still reading these stories every so often. I can't put my finder on exactly what it is, whether it is the sense of not being seen, or of someone slowly, painfully learning to take control of their own lives. but it all moves me and you capture some of that well here. and its worth noting even 3 years on. and for you to know that every now and then your thoughts and ideas find resonance with someone else.

I wish this happened on the show.

At that moment...

Mariana realized...

That she really screwed up.

Loved this! Great job. All of your stories are so good

I just re read this, but I wish Mariana would have had more consequences. I know you sold drugs to Kelsey, but I wish she would have got in trouble more. I would have loved for Mariana to have sold drugs to Kelsey and a guard saw?

I loved the part about throwing away the key

Callie doesn't believe in happy endings

nope still not typical because this was to not clean

Well you are self centered

is it wrong to want Callie to punch Marianna

what's this about

gaint leap nut huge

you can here the one boo over a thousand cheers