So a ton of nerfs that make Naruto having had the gamer ability his whole life pointless. Stats we don't know about but make him seem like a civilian student graduating from the academy when he really shouldn't have. He's not a Jinchuriki anymore, can't seem to level up much at all compared to his peers. Everything he does has an arbitary negative attachjed to it. Something everyone can do like elemental minipulation is now a effort based "reward" for him that might change his sex, and this story is now crack?

How a single chapter completely undermined the story.

Weird Naruto had the whiskers since birth it was never a trait of hosting Kurama otherwise Mito and kushina would have them. It was because Kushina was the host during her pregnancy with him.

Lol the omake!

this is...i don't even know what's going on here anymore.

*kudos*

for a moment i thought this was about sperms racing lol

Holy crap. You're too big brain for me, but I'd rather learn big brain words from a big brain fanfic.

I hope they get over there trust issues. Naruto just seems to have been cut off and did not finish his thought. It feels like he is in a fugue state of confusion all chapter. Things were a little too vague at times moving from one scene to the next. It was good exposition and I liked the developments but some things seem off. Like I know that Kakashi already knew but presumably he would want to know why Naruto was talking about it now. Why was the team wandering off when Kakashi had not dismissed them? Presumably he has lost his gamers mind so that could account for his addled emotions. Why would he be gung ho about going on that mission again? He has foreknowledge that would presumably be useful to Kakashi who would probably have another more qualified team sent on the mission. My suggestion is to take a different route and do a different original (or filler) mission. While cliche the wave mission is extremely formative for a team that hates each other and sets the stage going forward. This team is not like that, they for the most part get along and have almost none of the same grievances that the canon group had. They don't have the same drive to prove themselves and Kakashi seems responsible enough to avoid a death trap. Looking over ot I can see that Sasuke is hurt that Naruto did not trust him. And the flippant attitude made it worse. The use of the menus is fine as it gets the point across. I wonder what route you are going to go with shikamaru? I will elaborate more as I think of it.

Chapter 11 and 12 are a bit of a mess when it comes to clarity and continuity.

The end of this chapter is ruining the story

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

I hope Naruto tells the team about his death. That might patch things up with Sasuke.

Aww.. Naruto turning into a girl may actually make the gamer’s mind fail. It would be fun to see him mess around with his biology and accidentally become a mini-Kushina for a few days. It would be good for infiltration missions at least.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Awesome fic!