This is really great, and has the potential to be amazing! I love the idea of the Shield stealing this young woman away from a bad situation, and using that as a stepping stone to greatness for all four of them. I agree with Michael Cole on this one: "I can't wait to see where this goes!" I also love the element of sneaky underhandedness that you gave the Shield men. Do you intend to make any romantic pairings? With the attitudes and cohesive tactics the Shield has shown so far, I think that a foursome would play out rather smoothly...

love it.

LOVE!