You might want to avoid reading/watching Bludgeoning Angel Dokuro-chan then. Also, why'd you only make this story one chapter long? I want to see Dio!

Not a bad start. Some parts could use some work. BTW, have you ever thought of writing about "Red Steel"? There is a surprising lack of stories in that section and the Swordslinger is a really cool character. I'm even more surprised you haven't used the Swordslinger himself in your stories.

huh.

I hope you decide to make this a full series

I like this Keitaro and the fact that the current tenants of the Hina Inn abuse canon Keitaro to overkill sickens me. Also, I stopped watching the anime because the episodes weren't really funny at all and would be worse if it was the other way around.

Hell yeah! I imagined the Stardust Crusaders theme playing every time Keitaro's stand distributed justice! XD Great crossover story!

just read it and found it awesome but when looked for more Love Hina and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure Crossover fanfictions I was kinda down because there is only this one

This is actually kind of scary. Naru was punched in the face, meaning she was actually trying to kill Keitaro? Wow.

This was a fun and entertaining read. I don't like how the girls treat keitaro in the canon. I loved the pairing in this story.

So much win!

LIKE SEE MORE THIS !

I love this. From what i seen, heard, and read of love hina the anime was a stupid idea with a horrible sense in romance and comedy. I mean everyone has their limit and keitaro wouldn't have been different if he was real person. Anyway great oneshot and continue the great work with your fanfiction

Nice. I really liked it.

I was reading it and I don't read watch a bunch of jojo adventure but I know the jist of it and we'll great begging of a story again love the way kei is acting really funny and the way he treats the girls is great not bashing but still setting a line for them. Hope to read more soon

I appreciate the detail you put into Judas Priest, even if I'm having trouble remembering his/its face.

I know that Yakuza guy was asking for it, but Keitaro's wording came out as a passive threat. Which it kind of was...

I don't know much about Love Hina, but her reasoning for not wanting to try and kick Keitaro around all day is definitely in character. Then you took it a step further by having her be testy the next day.

It's great to see Josuke follow in his grandfather's footsteps. It's even better to see him make Naru and Motoko sit their sorry butts down and give them a stern talking too!

You say Keitaro's attitude is inspired by One Punch Man, but don't a lot of JoJo characters disregard danger?