Reviews for In The Next Room
Guest chapter 3 . 6/18/2018
Dats so cute! Now all we need is NaLu babies!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2018
Wow natsu's right. She is a weirdo. Who would dream of getting married with their crush and having a baby?
Kittycopper12 chapter 3 . 7/22/2017
Loved it please make more but mabye of a different ship
Lenachwann chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
This was such a good story , it was cutefunnysmutty I loved it
guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2017
Jealous Natsu is hot. Would you ever be interested in doing a follow up on this? It would be hilarious to see Natsu react to someone asking Lucy out before knowing that she's taken.
quite-a-riot chapter 3 . 3/14/2017
Yay! A finished one! Thank you for this lovely romp! But the only thing missing was a big old Lucy kick to Natsu's head for being so ungodly stupid and putting her through all that shit. ESPECIALLY knowing she could hear him the whole time! Dick move! DICK MOVES DO NOT DESERVE BLOW JOBS! ok, so now I'm done. Thanks for writing this story!
Cassi0chan chapter 3 . 2/16/2017
I really liked this story very much! The lemon was written incredible! I loved how you described everything in detail.

I don’t understand why some readers complained about Lucy forgiving Natsu so quickly. They weren’t together when he slept with all these women and he even thought of Lucy every time he had sex with them. I really don’t understand people’s problem.
I thought it was realistic and of course it was stupid of Natsu to sleep around, but I understand why he did it. It wasn’t just because he needed sex, but to prevent himself to lose control and pounce on Lucy.
Some readers seem to not have understood Natsu at all in this story. Just ignore these people. ;)
Rogue-Flamez chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
this is cute.
infinitelypanda chapter 3 . 4/4/2016
this was a great story. My only complaint is that virgins don't have a barrier. hymens stretch. they aren't something you break.
Sassassassin chapter 3 . 4/4/2016
Great story, loved the dynamic between Lucy and Natsu
Satisfied Reader chapter 3 . 11/27/2015
To be honest I'm kind of disappointed. It started of great until now. Like I get it but come on Lucy where is your respect!? Your honor?! Pride?! Dignity?! You hear the man you love sleeping around and you're willing to forgive that?! All for the fact he supposedly loved you?! If he was so in love he wouldn't be such a man whore! I'm sorry writer, it started off so well until we witnessed the unrealistic situation of how they ended up together. I don't buy it.
TOASTER101 chapter 3 . 11/28/2015
I do like this fic, but im slightly annoyed that the confrontation wasn't such a big deal. Natsu was a man slut; he didn't deserve Lucy.
Thats just my opinion. I loved it till chapter 3.p.~
Alicia Trinidad chapter 3 . 11/26/2015
lol I loved it. The character's were in well character and hot lemons and limes! Keep up the good work girl!
DestinysRequiem chapter 3 . 11/24/2015
That last pat was little far fetched, but funny all the same. I would've teased Gray more about Juvia staying over, but that's cause I'm slightly evil inside. Heh heh...
BakaFangirl chapter 3 . 11/24/2015
AWWW THIS WAS SO CUTE!️️ I just have 1 request... 1 more lemon chapter please this 1 was smoking!
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