I love how you added the hit points like in the anime, i think Karma being able to do 100 is a little much but i don't really care

Um... If I'm gonna be honest, I expected better. Now I know about the whole 'don't like, don't read' thing, but this was a little cringy. You still did a fairly good job tho!

it was good and funny. xD but im just wondering why'd you put Okuda on the tag tho. xD She's not even mentioned in the story.

Pretty good; lots of -kuns in there, but it's only a formality :) Liked it and can't wait to see more!

Why?

I don't get why so many people like the nagisa x karma fanfics so much and not nagisa x kayano ships.

It is sad to Many so called Fans refuse to make a Nagasai x Kayano Fiction

You killed me. Like. Seriously. I clicked on it for Karmanami and I get slash. Literally.

...I am going to shiver in a corner, trying to get rid of what happened here. No offence.

Poor Nagisa, I doubt he'll be able to stand tomorrow.. I really liked this I found it very interesting and kind of funny at some times... Plus I love this ship... OTP -

Lol, how the hell did karma manage to take a picture during that point? XD. Love the story.

That was AWESOOOOME! WONDERFUL! BEAUTIFUL! AAAHHH

I was so scared when reading the tag, you put up Okuda and Kayano so I thought you'd pair them, but hey, I went and read it I HAVE NO REGRETS THIS IS AWESOME—YOU'RE AWESOME!

Nagisa's panic fit and Karma's carefreeness got me a great laughing fut XD XD aww Nagisa, I promise you won't die, you'll just get weird stares for the rest of your life, but that's okay because you only need to look at Karma ;D

Karma: damn, that's one smooth pick up line
Nagisa: DONT TAKE NOTE OF IT, IT WONT WORK ON ME

I would love to read more, but keep happily writing! Your happiness is the most important thing :)

Ummm this is rating M not T just saying. This is mature.
I really didn't expect that. Not a huge fan of yaoi. I support it though.
P.s. why is Okuda tagged when she is not even in the story?