Very good story! I always enjoy story about fei long. Thank u, author.

Great chapter! I admit I was skeptical when I started reading this (sorry if some of my comments came off as rude) but now I love this story! Thank you so much for suprising me. :D

I love Mei Lin and Hisui too. I wish that thay existed in the canon too. Mei Lin is badass and manipulative, she surely showed Asami who is a boss.

And I guess Hisui is going to be the great leader of Yakuza one day... Even greater than her father.

Thank you so much for writing this and sorry for my nitpicking. This is perhaps the best finder series fanfiction stoty I have ever read. We need more stories like this here in fanfiction community. :)

"Some of his people arent sure that Nozomu is the right one to be their future leader, he inherited weakness from his mother… and lets not talk about Hisui"

Hey Aki is not weak in the canon! Its the fault of stupid fanfiction writers who make him too submissive for no reason.

BUT I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT IS SO AWESOME! ITS THE BEST FANFICTION STORY I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME!

She was the typical high school girl, not the kind of woman that could live in the mafia.

Um, hasnt she lived in mafia her entire life? How can she be this naive and clueless? Am I missing something? :O

Poor Hisui, I feel so bad for her. :'(

Great story even though Im nickpicking here! Welldone! :D

Maybe he should get to know Mei Lin like he did with Nozomu and Hisui.

Five seconds later...

"Because he knew that I wont give a damn about that brat, I only care about yours"

Asami changes his mind REALLY fast XD

Sama is one of japanese honorifics not chinese.

"If you eve dare to put a finger on my baby girl, let alone trying to kill her, I will shot you down. And believe me, I can.

No you cant idiot! They JUST TRIED TO KILL HER AND YOU ARE NOT DOING A THING WTF

Btw I like your character Mei Lin a lot. :D She is such a badass. Its not easy to be the Mafia Princess and heiress of Chinese Mafia. I hope she will get her revenge on Asami but not by killing those twins, they are innocent.

And what was with that criminal thing anyway? Her father was no criminal!

How could she not known that? Doesnt she live with her family or is she just dense, huh? She is sixteen, she is not a child!

"I have to be strong, Im a daughter of the mafia after all"

Wow she accepted this whole My-Father-Is-Mafia-Boss thing REALLY fast didnt she?

Fei long is a male. He is not "mama". :-D
LMAO

Ok this is yaoi but you know what I mean :-D

I love it

Wow,i love it..Go hisui fighting spirit to kick that arrogant bitch for pay back to hurt her and threat her family..I love to see girls power to conquer and survive in hard mafia lifestyle..Please make soon your next story about raising asami hisui become deathly woman..Pretty plz you will keep your spirit to write asami family revenge hehehe..Can't wait it.

I'm really looking forward to the sequel. Hoping it 2ill be soon.

Thx for your all amazing story you created,hope you update soon your new story coz i am curious how hisui change and how hisui do to bring mei lin 't wait for your new mess perona-chan,you are great author.

I am really forward to see how much hisui change become woman that suit with mafia lifestyle and i really want to see hisui and nozomu to defeat and kick mei more story about asami family coz i am love all member asami for your all hardwork to write this story and can't wait to your new story update.

Plz give me more mess and can't wait to see new mess you create..i am love it your story so much and see how much hisui change become strong for your wonderful story