Awwwww...What a sweet way to end this lovely story. I love your style of writing and this was an awesome story.

Amazing job on the chapter. You keep surprising me with each new chapter. Keep up the awesomely amazing and wonderful work

Awww... Pegasus finally finished the nursery. I don't know how you do it, but you come up with the best chapters ever. Keep up the amazing and awesomely wonderful job.
:)

Awww... Pegasus finished the nursery. Best chapter ever! Keep up the amazingly awesome job.

This was an awesome chapter. keep up the amazing job!

Great chapter! I really want to see a story between Yugi and Atem, my two most fav characters

Great job on this chapter! I think you should do that story between Yugi and Atem. It would be great to see my 2 of my most fav characters together as brothers.

This chapter was absolutely, awesomely amazing. I loved it. Keep up the amazing job. I also love the melodious deck. I looked it up after I read the duel between Mai and Cecilia, and I know I said this b 4, but that deck is pretty awesome. My deck is a mix between spell casters and water monsters.

Also this part... did she... just sing a musical section for this story?
It's like I'm watching a Disney flick now.

I don't think that in this desperate situation, the gang is going to let her finish the song. The least they'll do is politely interrupt so they could save the world that much quicker.

You could then put the whole song in an author's note so in the story it doesn't look like you're trying to force of song down at that point just so the reader could see a song which seems to be more important than the plot or saving the world from a gargantuan soul eating demon.

Creative song none the less though.

And a Cliffhanger for now. Hopefully they finally get some story of their own and more development between them.
You really speed through that!

Chapter 1 reposted right here, whoa you might need to fix this.

Cecelia is killing me right now. She's playing Melodious of all things!
The moment I read "First Movement Solo," my composure just broke down into hysterics.
With these futuristic cards, for crying out loud, she's playing essentially a Tier Zero and may very well easily be the Queen of games!

Pegasus really just broke the game way to early but I guess anything goes for his beloved, even if it means making his wife the most OP deck in yugi-verse creation at this point in time.
Yugi and Kaiba really have their work cut out for them right now.
Guys, just let Cecelia-chan take down everybody with a Melodious lock-down & boost combo. :D

I better not see Cecelia lose suddenly to a Skill Drain and Raigeki because it "suddenly" appeared in Easily Beatable Opponent's Deck #1.
She better be main decking that triple Mystical Space Typhoon and triple Royal Decree for protection!
Hope she also has Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen and Transmodify to go faster into the Stun Turbo. XD

Also, the Mai bashing seems pretty rough in this. I mean Marik's Shadow Realm messed her up as bad as the Curse Seal did to Sasuke's psyche. I forgot if Mai's friends knew what it did to her though? Seeing how this is very canon, I guess they didn't?

Overall, this chapter put a smile to my face because of its antics so nicely done on that. :)

Whoa, all of sudden she can duel? The what heck?
That's awesome that she's going to be awesome but dang, that popped up out of no where!

I felt like Kaiba's reaction to Cecelia is the kind he would reserve for Yugi and his close knit friends specifically.
I imagine Kaiba would be more blunt and direct but not out right condescending and rude.
If anything he would've been as curious as Mokuba but would've been straight forward in knowing who she is.
How I saw a revised scene of the final bits may play out like:

"And who might you be?" Kaiba asked in a rough demeanor.
*Cecelia's polite yet annoyed confirmation*
"Hmph. I see." he stated with a confirming attitude.

But oh my goodness, she gets more screen time. That's at least decent plus.

It seems to be going through just the canon it seems at this point with Cecelia simply tagging along.
Well... the original lore never gave much history or ability for her anyways.
Strangely the writing has been a whole lot of dialogue for quite a while.
I feel like the quickness of the chapters now help me try to figure out what's next quicker as a positive.