Sora shakes his head. "No, I definitely don't see dead people."
Eyyy, I see what you did there

Really interesting that the Heartless can’t enter the church. It might have some religious implications but I’m not sure

Once again you delivered a story worthy of scholars.

Did we just see Xigbar or Axel speaking with Frooll?

what a wild ride :')

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Definitely didn't expect the proposal to go that way, but it' t! Really shows how far our Knight and Mage have went. and dare I say, #goals worthy!

I bet Azlyn's reaction to Larxene's 'grave' is a good indicator of what to expect in the CoM installment!

for all their talk of having no emotions, some Organization members are amazingly sincere and not so far from normal. even though the no heart thing is subverted. I'd be torn too, but knowing Axel's coming back as Lea makes it all better :')

you certainly delivered the scene justice! I like how traces of Roxas can be seen through some of Sora's actions - more prominent than in-game. it'd be strange if Roxas completely 'shut down' after joining Sora, you know?

this closure is nice. the loose ends are tied up more neatly than in-game, so kudos for you! and it makes more sense, giving a reason to go to Twilight Town rather than it's just there.

ooooh that sick burn. I love how they're all hyping up Tron ahahah. it's quite endearing, considering Users like Sora, Azlyn, and Telary might be the only people he meets who'd do that.

soo I just ended my studies and have so much more freedom to indulge in fanfiction again. I'm in awe to see this story had finished and spawned a continuation! excuse me as I try to catch up soon ;u;

The added detail about Amuk Munrah was a nice touch. Initially, I didn't think much of in-game conversations, but after going through it multiple times, it felt kinda restricted to just plot stuff. So seeing that extra bit, tied to Luxord's appearance here rather than end-game, smooths the flow. and it does make more sense, too.

So good! I’m not in tears, but it’s still good.

Agent P. Like a boss

I hate to knit pick, but I thought that if you cut one head off of a hydra, only two rise in its place? You seem to have gotten your math wrong… or something.

Perry the platypus! Phineas! Ferb! You are a genius for including those geniuses.