Frans and papyfrisk shippers go brrrrr

Fantastic fic! I loved it and everyone was so in-character!

Finished reading this the other day and was just letting the thoughts and emotions set in... I must say that this was a really good fic and I enjoyed every second reading it. The character were the best part of this fic hands down, I'm not a fan of fluff but the interactions were just so amazingly done. This fic produced my favorite interpretation of Chara, her intentions were soo pure and the glimpse of her violent tendencies actually felt realistic and how that chara can lead to a genocide chara. The emotional moments really hit hard too, the atmosphere in those scenes were pretty amazingly done, I especially loved the scene in which Frisk broke down in front of Papyrus in Grillbys, I felt Frisk's pain there and this is just one of many amazing scenes in the fic. A scene I had some problem with was the scene in which Frisk was almost killed, I think that Undyne's reaction was overly tame and I was expecting something much more. As for the overall all story on a whole, I didn't like frisk much at the end due to the level of selfishness she displayed, there are soo much problems with Frisk basically perma sealing the barrier like that morally and lore based for the fact of that the water in waterfall was running out and that the overcrowding problem that can't really be fixed. I guess that was the point in you making them selfish in their goals, but the idea that Frisk and such would be more happy in the underground feels plenty unstated with when they were above ground you never showed any negatives of em being up there.
The fic had little to no pacing errors, the filler scenes were soo good that I had no problem going through them, the character development throughout the fic was truly amazing and commendable beyond measure. The plot was a little bland in its progression but it was still overall good. Good on you with this amazing story!

I normally don't like to common of a completed fic midway through reading it, I normally just leave a massive comment at the end... but these last few chapters were just amazing, had to say something. Reading this had my full attention and had me pacing around.

They're going underground instead of a garden for 'fresh air'?
How does he know that the world goes black during a shortcut if he has his eyes closed?

I just golf clapped for that recipe and writing and confused my mom

this was such an amazing fic! i really love the concept of the magic and determination stuff, how do you even come up with it all? it’s so good 12/10 would read 100 times

Hooorayyyyyhy

This. This is beautiful. I have no words to describe it... Just... Wow

Undyne is nuke-ing some soup XD

If your still around there is a typo (can be fixed but not important) it’s “quickly covering her hand with her mouth” just letting u know

I LOVE THIS FIC! Reread it at least 3 times

Oh my goodness, I just finished this whole story in two days, and I wanted to let you know that it was absolutely fantastic! I love Frisk and Chara's relationship! And Pap is amazing! And Alphys and Undyne and Sans and Toriel and Asgore and MK and Asriel! This story gave me all the happy feels! Thank you for writing it! Even though I didn't read it when it first came out, I'm very glad to have stumbled across it. Thank you very much! (also I used a lot of exclamation points.)

Haha, this is amazing! It's really funny -really punny too- and has really neat ideas for magic and interesting ideas in general. It would have been pretty funny if a 'chair-i-table' or an 'I don't chair' had been snuck into chapter 15 though. Great fic, I love it 3

I love your story it is very captivating and the plot was very well written. I love it when the story is is long an actually finished. I absolutely love this story and it is easily my TOP favorite story EVER! Thank You for sharing it with us.