Reviews for The Pale Rider
Ipswich Myrtle R. Clearwater chapter 26 . 9/18
I don't even know where to start. This story is absolutely the most beautiful, thrilling and astonishing fan fiction I have ever read.
The way you portrayed Seth, the way he acts and speaks , it seems to be real. And Vera? Oh gosh, I loved her since the beginning.

Also I really need to compliment your way of using the language. Your writing style is so formal and elegant, every sentence is a joy to read.
sofipatch chapter 26 . 9/16
AMOOOO, POR FAVOR ACTUALIZA amé tu historia 3
shizzlethis1 chapter 26 . 6/12
OMG! What happens next?!
onlyunicornqueen chapter 26 . 10/15/2019
I need more chapters, plss:((
HappyWolf.V chapter 26 . 8/6/2019
are you going to update this story?
thebeezekneeze chapter 26 . 7/31/2019
I’m obsessed Vera is so cute and she’s even cuter with Seth. You write really well and her character is charming.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 26 . 5/21/2019
This was *excellent*. I really enjoy the power dynamics being completely flipped around from most Imprint stories. Usually it's the werewolf imprinting on the relatively helpless human. In this case it's the rather young werewolf imprinting on a cosmic deity powerful on a scale that's difficult to comprehend. Which is a fun mixup!

I also really like Vera as a character- you've managed to make her distinctly human *enough* that it's interesting, but there's still a certain amount of... other about her. That's good: she's not normal, so she shouldn't read like she is. Very well done.

The Seth/Vera relationship is also really good. They absolutely adorable and I love it.

Thanks very much for taking the time to write this, I really enjoyed it!
RosieDunne chapter 26 . 5/18/2019
Thanks for the chapter!
Sdflky558 chapter 26 . 1/9/2019
This is an amazing story, PLEASE continue it! I'm dying over here lol.
luna153 chapter 26 . 1/1/2019
Love it! Can't wait for the next update ;)
berryfarfelle chapter 26 . 12/25/2018
this is so unique! I’m soso hooked on this story after finishing your paul/oc one. pleeeeass update
Guest chapter 26 . 12/17/2018
Hahaha yes! I've been following your story for a while now, and I still love it as much as the day several years ago when I first read the first chapter. I hope you continue this story, I am truly excited to see where our cute Sethy and gorgeous Vee end up. Hopefully somewhere full of lemons xx
Toalan chapter 26 . 12/12/2018
Love this chapter. Keep it going
Fifi chapter 26 . 11/28/2018
Yay new chapter!
This is really good, I like seeing more of Vera’s “occupation”, it was interesting to see.
You may not have traumatised Seth as much as I thought you would, but I still think he is not going to forget that easily.
I can’t wait for the next chapter, and your life comes before a story so take all the time you need, but please continue to update.
Guest chapter 26 . 11/28/2018
I am feeling...things
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