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J'ai lu ton histoire depuis le début jusqu'à la fin, vers la fin ça m'a donné envie de pleurer quand Alex voulait quitter kara mais sinon c'était juste woaw!

I love it

Alright, this is an interesting idea and I appreciate the approach you've taken in writing it. However, there are some glaring issues in these first chapters that make it difficult to keep reading.
The most apparent is a lack of sentence diversity. In almost every single paragraph you use ellipses. Even in those paragraphs you use ellipses in every sentence! I understand that the tone of these characters is uncertain but it escapes into the narrative and I honestly couldn't even read your second chapter. I kept on getting distracted by counting how many ellipses you used.
It's a good idea and if you work on your sentence structures I'm sure the story will turn out to be wonderful. I'm sorry if the above paragraph seems kind of harsh but sometimes everyone needs some criticism. I know my ego certainly does.
Don't let the cheese sweat,
FoM

the way you have set up your charecter structure makes alex sound like zealots murder who is trying to self justify that she has been working for monsters who experiment and vivasect sentient biegns, that way she dosent have to aknoledge that she herself is a monster for the same thing.

Great chapter so does non thing supergirl still has her power
Still waitting for supergirl to be back in the uk great show

here is a thought if your are going to set Alex up with power and set her up to be a sort of hero can you make her a bit like batman a more dark melancholic persona that would just be awesome just a though. Other then that love the story and hope we see another chapter soon

Cool chapter alex is back with a little extra

Wow looks like you killed alex but in the world of flying people anythings possible great chapter

Low blow by her nutty aunt using the green stuff

;)

badass Alex and Kara

Como ela ficou nessa situação vc não vai explicar. E astra e aliada ou não .. e bem vindo de volta

:-D

Nice chapter i like that hanks a good guy now