hahaha orochimaru uh gave hinata a... you know what

Really love this. Can’t wait to read the sequel.

Pretty great story. I love the changes from canon and how each character reacted to one another. Couldn’t stop reading until I finished. Gonna hop over to part 2 now

fun story to read and re-read now if only there was a reading/watching fic for this if only for the reaction of a post 4th war Naruto seeing a female version of himself being a chibi-kaguya

y'know even after re-reading this I still don't understand how in cannon orchimaru was able to resit the Shinigami's pull when Kurama who's the mother F'ing Kyuubi couldn't let alone how in cannon the curse seal sasuke could stand toe to toe with a 1 tail cloak Naruto

Umm... wouldn't naruto have all five nature transformations because of the rinnegan? And isnt sasuke supposed to have a lightning affinity and hinata a water affinity? Dude, get your facts straight.

*snort* jounin level chakra? Paleeeaaassee! She probably has beyond kage level chakra! Shes an uzumaki jinchuuriki with an uzumaki jinchuuriki mother! Her chakra levels would be off the charts!

I dont think kaguya s eyes bulge when they activate. And they are completely pale white. I dont think they have a blue tint.

Shouldn't she be addressed as chan since he is a she? And does she really need to be called naruto? Naruko works. Naruto is a Male name.

Ok so enjoying so far but I can’t help but note even thou you make it clear she is female you treat Naruto as Male even going so far as to call her Naruto-kun instead of chan or giving her a different name. Personally I feel maelstrom or fishcake rarely fit a female. If you lack imagination then you can always go with the default goto of Naruko

On a reread, I noticed that some of what the fox revealed to Naruto was stuff she already knew/told. And yet was surprised. Back in chapter 6 it's mentioned that she's interested in Fuuinjutsu because of the fox being sealed in her AND what the Hokage told her of her clan. I would think that 'fuuinjutsu experts' would have been a part of that information that made her interested in it. Unless the Hokage had just said that it was commonly used by them.

Am I the only one that hates nuruto be medical nin

Wow you sure Hinata and sasuke got enough new Power? I mean Rinne-sharingan just like that?! It took Madara decades to get it -.- and he gets it just like that... and the fact that he cant cast infinte tsukuyomi is not really a limittation it is just one abillity and he still can use the others which are more dangerous... he became a God through one seal is pretty ludicrous! Hinatas abillity is propably in the some level as Sasukes... which means two people who can be gods just like this -.-

nice

nice