| Reviews for Criss-Cross |
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KatoGS123 chapter 1 . 4/21 Ya know... you could put an epilogue chapter that has a reveal in it, like have it so Marinette smells like the cheese danish at school day and when asked about it she could say “oh, I just made them for a friend of mine, frankly I’m just glad I didn’t need to get a lot of fish...” or something like that and have Adrien overheard/notice Plagg trying to sneak off to Marinette and presto! You got a get start to a reveal, you can even leave it as a cliff hanger with Adrien thinking to himself how he’s gonna ask his lady on a date before walking off towards Marinette, leaving the rest to us readers to imagine what happens next |
Decker389 chapter 1 . 12/17/2019 Lol |
Solei Dragheart chapter 1 . 6/5/2018 Great story I loved it. |
spinnerofdark chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 : ) |
secretwhovianpony chapter 1 . 8/5/2016 This was adorkable funny. |
Dwarrior chapter 1 . 3/15/2016 Cute story... |
AmyNChan chapter 1 . 11/28/2015 Pfft, the entertainment with this one is very high. XD |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 11/26/2015 Gosh, this is hilarious! xD if only this is Canon... I would probably laugh so hard at every minutes they're in each other's costume. but I do wish this is Canon... |
missillsy chapter 1 . 11/12/2015 Hey you story is great! I just wanted to let you know that I highly suggest changing the name of Marinettes Chat noir transformation since Chatte in french is used the same way as bitch is in english. I had already seen a warning for this on tumblr and I also checked translating it to English and it literally translates to pussy. So yeah I guess lady noir or almost anything else would be good instead. However if you are French and that this is completely acceptable then you can just ignore this. Your writing is really good though no worries there! |
FutureMageOtaku99 chapter 1 . 11/12/2015 That's so great! Oh my gosh, I can see that happening! Keep up the good work! |
megamegaturtle chapter 1 . 11/12/2015 This was freaking cute lol |
haruza chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 Haha, so cute! |
Jessica Jayme Bell chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 Absolutely bloody brilliant! |
JazzGirl123 chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 This is literally one of the greatest things ever; thank you for taking my post and making it into such a great story! Your writing is amazing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 Ohmygod this was hilarious! |