Reviews for The Goblets New Competitors
WhiteElfElder chapter 7 . 9/4/2016
Those teams can fight they way they do because their Aura helps protect them like a skin-level shield. How is Harry going to stand up to that if he does not have Aura or it is not unlocked? Plus, doesn't a semblance often accompany unlocking of Aura?
WhiteElfElder chapter 6 . 9/4/2016
Will they unlock Harry's aura...if he has one?
AnimeLatias chapter 7 . 7/24/2016
I don't know how to pm but I wouldn't mind being a beta reader and I am really liking the story
Natekleh chapter 7 . 7/21/2016
I really love your fiction. It's awesome!
Oh yeah, I kind of want to say that you should make Wiess face of the Ukrainian Ironbelly. Though I'm pretty sure that the tournament (if it were real) would not use this dragon but it's a pretty powerful dragon and the largest and I'm sure this will make Wiess look impressive.
If you dont like the idea...sorry...
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 6/13/2016
Awesome story continue please.
ClockworkDragon5 chapter 7 . 5/25/2016
you should do a water dragon for wiess
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 7 . 5/16/2016
lololololol Nice bro.
Kai Alison Flame chapter 7 . 5/12/2016
YES! WOOHOO!
the god of wolves chapter 7 . 5/10/2016
i was hoping for ruby :( oh well GO WIESS
roadworkahead chapter 7 . 5/10/2016
YAY!
Maverickdm chapter 7 . 5/10/2016
why not use a grimm for Weiss's "dragon" to differentiate her from the other champion, this is just an idea but this is a fantastic story and I cannot wait for the next chapter :D
ultima-owner chapter 7 . 5/10/2016
Nora giving Ren a bone crushing hug when he asks her out to the ball then pestering Coco to find them dress wear that compliant each other.
Coco criticizing how bad the dress robes are. that she "wouldn't even let even the grimm wear them"
javegar453 chapter 7 . 5/10/2016
Hi, really enjoying this story but I feel like I should tell you that I think you should change a bit of chapter two and three, nothing majorly just that it has been revealed by Rooster teeth that Ozpin actually drinks Hot Chocolate and not coffee
TheFishKing chapter 7 . 5/10/2016
really Weiss y not Ruby or Velvet or any one else i have nothing against the ice princess but y weiss
Reishin Amara chapter 6 . 5/10/2016
im liking this story already o.o
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