Ahhhhh this was AMAZING! I love Hughes shenanigans, you captured him (and all of them, really) perfectly. :)

this was sooooo cute! And of course, maes, forever royai's matchmaker. I like the way you described roy's thoughts, and for riza to be (not-so) oblivious. Faved.

I really like HP AU Royai, it's really cute! Roy is very funny when he is thinking that Riza isn't affect by Love Potion lol

Oh my God. I love your story. I had as much fun as Maes watching (reading about) Roy's anxiety. You've created great characters in this story. I hope you are going to continue this story because it is really amazing.

oh my GOSH this was so CUTE and PRECIOUS my small BABIES

you should do a sequel to this if you find yourself so inclined because this AU is lovely and so are your writing and characterization