I liked the story you created, I didn't like how you wrote to Iroha, I didn't like the idea of him flirting with Hayama and hating Yui and Yukino even though I understand the jealousy towards them after the divorce. And the past of why the service club was dissolved is interesting and works for history but it lacks something else

I binge read this since yesterday it was a really enjoyable read, I enjoyed seeing the Service club reunite with each other and Hachiman's relationship with his daughter. I have to admit that I found the backstory reveal in chapter 10 a little disappointing because I myself pictured something different after such a long read. But overall I really enjoyed this story and am glad I took the time to read the entire thing.

I feel i just wasted a couple of days reading this story.. No, the story was good.. Actually it was great at the start, although i didn't like the way Iroha's character was presented, it was an interesting take to Hachiman's decision not to pursue his feelings with either Yukino or Yui to preserve the friendship which backfired spectacularly.. I was already expecting the divorce part even though i was a bit sad, I like Iroha a lot so it pained me a little especially with them having a daughter.. I understand that it has to happen for the story to progress.. I'm just disappointed with the ending.. It implies that Hachiman never learned from his mistake of the past, and both Yukino and Yui, agreeing not to be with Hachiman is just absurd after all those years of hurting, suppressed feelings and the lot.. It makes no sense at all, it's like the old saying "if i can't have him, you can't either" only on a friendly terms.. Should have just pick either Yukino or Yui, or better just got back with Iroha and start over.. But again, the last line was perfect, they were foolish as they said so..

This was just...perfect. I really hope you continue this someday!

Well I love your writing style immensely and the last couple of chapter are especially well done. But I have to say, Iroha is a little bit too OOC in my opinion, what she’s done so far feels like too way out of her character. Also she go over Hikki real quickly after the mess with Sensei outside of the uni, I know there was a bit of a timeskip but still. Also, Hikki hanging out with all of those women will most certainly upset his daughter. Going through a divorce, kids aren’t going to like the new men their mom is around or the new women their father is near, Hikki at this point haven’t talked to Yukino and Yui in a long time so they were new People to his daughter and she would not like her father messing around with women that wasn’t her mother. I know she’s only 5 but little kids especially won’t understand and won’t like their parents with other people like in this way, especially with how close Hikki is to them. To the poor girl it looks like Hikki is trying to replace Iroha with a new mom. Older kids understand that their parents are going to look for new partners, they understand but they sure in hell DO NOT like it. It’s not like the daughter has been seeing her fathers friends since birth, then it would be a complete different situation. These are new people in her and her fathers life for all she knows; trying to replace mommy. Again I don’t like what was done with Iroha, she wouldn’t be like this and the marriage I wouldn’t think would self destruct like this plus Hikki of all people knows how she is and the masks people put on, including her.

That said, I do like how the story shaped after the premise of the situation. You hVe excellent writing skills and your story is really shaping up. My only gripe is the premise isn’t very believable in real life or even when it comes to how the characters are supposed to be like. I know I sounded very harsh but honestly I like the story and I spent an entire day reading it because I was so into it. It seriously are me think ain’t relationships and life and all good writing should make you think. Kudos to you! I just would like to see some sort of resolution between Hikki and Iroha.

Well I binged this like so many others. I actually had work to do so reading this was a big mistake, I think I spent all day reading. Such a great story and great writing, good job! This shit made me cry at times, just saying. You need to know that my precious tears came out for this. But Jesus Christ this got sad at times, I know the point of the story is that Hikki is divorced and that there were glaring issues with the marriage from the very beginning, but a big part of me still wants Hikki to reconcile with Iroha. I know I’m being very naive about divorce, it’s just that I have 0 experience when it comes to this, so I’m talking out of pure ignorance. It’s just hard for me, who’s a sap at heart, that two people who loved each other, got married, and had a child can leave so painfully. I’m not saying what you wrote is inaccurate or unrealistic, I’m saying that I’m so fucking unaware and naive about this shit. I just really want to see Iroha and him make up or something, I kknow what I want is completely out of the question and unrealistic, but a man can hope you know. Hopefully I’ll learn one day why these things happen, but right now I’m a dumb motherfucker.

Holy cow mate, firstly I just spent the past like 17 hours reading this story and I loved every second of it, and like my previous review stated I am quite sad to know that this is for these characters I enjoyed everyone in the story and honestly if they ever decided to do a 10 years later arc I feel like this is exactly how it would transpire, but alas the idea of that happening is incredibly slim, so sir or ma’am I’d like to thank you for writing this story every chapter had me captivated and I enjoyed it so much, so good job and thank you again.

This feels like a very season 1 anime like ending and I actually like, though it’s gonna sad to leave these characters behind I still really enjoyed this fanfic so thank you

I really loved the story. I'm kinda disappointed tho that hachiman didn't end up getting paired together with either of yukino or yui. Sad

This is clearly a harem ending. He should just get them both pregnant and call it a day... or rather 18 years.

i think u should have iroha and hachiman get back together now that any pairing with those two are gone

Wow did their relationship just turn back to the original status who? Did they just really busy out a Hayama? So they sought out for something real and settled for something fake?

Sorry, but 8man would not accept such a kind of fake relationship. If he did he would have gotten back together with Iroha to give his daughter a "fake" loving family.

I really like this fix, but man, it really gets me mad and angsty. Overall I really liked it at the beginning, but now it's starting to feel like all this drama is starting to become some kind of pointless drama from a Korean drama.

While I feel that you've captured our dear 8man's personality well, I also feel like you haven't either. While he can be pathetic or a coward he wouldn't accept a lie or pointless gestures. I feel like he would've been more uprfront with his feelings throughout your story.

While true, he older now and his views may have changed, there are somethings in his views that are a core part of his being. While I feel that it's okay that some of his views may have changed, I do not believe that his core beliefs had changed.

So I was kind of disappointed by how things turned out in this ending. Like seriously, 8man's going to just accept living with that lie? He basically just busted out a Hayama. That's not something I believe Hachiman can accept even if it is the only thing left that save their relationship. If he can so readily accept living a facade with two of his closest friends he would've accepted Iroha's proposition to get back together. If he can live with that kind of game relationship he could accept being a game living husband for his daughter's sale.

I'm almost sad at this kind of regression that they've gone back to. It feels hypocritical and cowardly, and most of all a facade. Even if he is pathetic and weak he isn't a fake.

Well rant over. I wish this story would get updated in the near future.

I have no words to describe what I just read so: I love you for writing this story, it took me for a ride I wasn't expecting. i'm really sad to see it ending, but thank you for your hard work on this, pleasure to read and a memorable story. Homura 3 I wish she had a happy family, whether it be with Iroha and Hikigaya or Hikigaya and someone. I loved her and her relationship with daddy Hikki.

does that mean... yes! end game hiratsuka is still a go! my dreams arent dead yet!