Vegeta's a jerk.

I love your Bulma

Your protrayal of Vegeta and Bulma (and Trunks) is becoming my favorite. They're still the same from TV but with a touch of your own personal spin to them. I loved Bulma's strength and fierceness even in scary situation, and I love her protective-ness over Trunks and how she calls him "baby". It's really sweet. Vegeta has nothing to worry about when his wife and son are Bulma and Trunks but I loved that he does worries. It says a lot. Really cool fic.

Trunks was adorable, begets was adorable in his own way, and Burma was a badass. Awesome.

mama killed it with science. what a great line. loved this story.

Really good, I was happy to find a story that shows Bulma as the intelligent, independent woman she is (holding on her own, but still human), instead of just a screaming girl that depends 100% of the warriors.
Already one of my favorites, I really like your stories by the way, hope you keep on )

I don't understand how I haven't read this before... maybe because I am too busy with my dumb Chemistry to have a always, your characterizations are spot on, your writing is eloquent, and I have nothing negative to say. amazing!

Science is definitely cool. Bulma never does back down from something she can handle, and she certainly got this taken care of. And Vegeta realized how much he cares for her and Trunks when he almost lost them; an important recognition to have. This hardcore family is unstoppable.

great chapter. love the strength of her character and science is cool

Amazing. What a great way to do justice for her character, and teach that fighting is not all about physical strength. Bulma is one impressive character and I love seeing her in action, needing no help from anything but her daring and intellect.

This is wonderful. I love your Bulma. She is so strong and smart. I love how she is teaching Trunks science. I love their Mother son bond. I love your characterization of Vegeta. I just love your writing!

Very cool premise. Something that strikes me about Bulma across all your stories is that she just doesn't give a damn if Vegeta really leaves or not, she doesn't have any expectations of him. It's quite different from most authors' renditions of Bulma where she definitely wants him to stay and can get emotional over it. I haven't gone through all your stories yet but I am curious how realistic this version of her is. Or is she just that purely confident that Vegeta loves her and respects her enough not to leave, not to hurt her or Trunks? She seems so utterly independent here that she really doesn't need him at all.

I can't tell you how much I love your stories, I have checked back every single day for the past two weeks looking for updates. Some of them I wish had more chapters though I know they're one shots. This is no exception. I love the way you write this family. I love that Vegeta is proud and stays in character without being a monster to his family. I love the Bulma is funny and smart when it counts. I just love the characterizations.

It's only the first chapter and I'm already in love with this story. I love whenever bulma uses her own strengths to conquer over physical strength. And then Vegeta being stubborn over his own feelings for his family lol. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Such a lovely piece! Always nice to see this three functions as a family because we just don't get to see it on the show! I mean Vegeta can be a really nice husband and father and they decide not to show it to everybody! I'm so glad you wrote this story and show the relationship between trunks and her mother too, and the strong and brave side of bluma, and last but not least the caring side of Vegeta! So much loves :) thanks for writing!