This is amazing! a little sad, but a great ending. This could be an amazing book if you wrote more chapters. I really think you should write more on it! I new you were a great writer, but the way you worded it sounds incredibly professional. You should keep on writing more chapters, but it's good as a one shot as well.

I loved so much the origin of Angel's name part. Your writing is really good

Awwwwwww so cute! ️

Oh, Fluttershy!
Ohhhhhh, I didn't need those feels anyway.
Oh, Flutters. T-T

Personally, I think you should do the sequel. This may have been short but it was interesting. I also like that it was darker than MLP usually is. There is darkness in light...you just have to know where to look.

I like it :)

Wow, that was sad! Thank the heavens Adam doesn't know this, otherwise his demon would awaken. Anyway, I think a sequel would be a good idea. And I think you did a really good job on this story. :) Adam's currently at One World Observatory in Manhattan with some friends, so he won't know.
-hears front door opening-
Oh, I messed up. I thought he was going to be back tomorrow. Well, Adam's back, so I got to go. Bye! :)

I really liked this. Good concept, and I could definitely see a sequel, or a second chapter. Either one would work. I was thrown for a loop when you said "toes" and "hands", but then it dawned on me that these are their human counterparts. At least, I'm pretty sure that's the case. Either way, the story was well written, and I would definitely be down for a sequel. This story has a lot of potential. Then again, you could just leave it here as a oneshot, and keep it ambiguous as to what happens. Just some suggestions :)
It's your story, so do whatever the heck you want with it. Whatever you do with it, this was very good, and I look forward to seeing more. That's all from me so...until next time...peace!

I have a great idea for a sequel, but I need a more constructed review by others to see if I should write it. Going back and rereading it, it was decent, no errors and made grammatical sense as far as I could tell, so nicely done. :) I could write the sequel for myself since I like this story since at this moment in time, my own life is depressing and has a shaky future. Perhaps once I get it all written I will post a chapter... Yeah, that's a good idea! Please people, do review for I am talking to myself, in a review to my own story because people suck at responding to phone calls or texts, or emails; responding to me in general. Ah now I'm making myself become even sadder! I must leave now...

This awesome. Keep up the good work:)

i really like it,and you could make another chapter