This story needs to be slowed down. There are cases with fics where there is no action and it just drags on, aka, the stuff you read to put yourself to sleep. Then there's the fics, like yours, that rush through from one fight to the next. No pacing or even wisp of a timeline it becomes confusing for no better word.
Your characters need development. You have been throwing your protagonists from one fight into the next, but failed to give them personality. If your readers don't have a bond with the characters when you throw the characters into the fire your not going to find your readers sitting on the edges of their seats.
Be more creative with word play. Reading very quickly, very quietly, etc several times within the same paragraph can drive someone a figurative wall. Have fun with words.

Interesting concept overall. Has a lot of potential. The plot is the only thing keeping me hooked. If a rewrite ever appears I would be interested in reading it.

Year 2525...you aren't going to bring halo into this are you?

Try to put lothal in the story and Ezra's parents

Try rebels were Goliath raises ezra and teach him how to fight

Not bad do you think you could have task force Goliath retreat to lothal were theyeet Ezra's parents and there is a COD crossover I'm working on if you want to have a look

If you have seen star wars rebels have price and the others be friends of Ezra's parents and have the teach ezra how to be like them

Good job, need to work on capitalization and making the story flow, and also putting on more detail into this.