| Reviews for A New Twist in Chance |
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WhiteEagle1985 chapter 22 . 7/24 A wonderful story here. |
Guest chapter 22 . 3/23 give him a ditto because they can do a lot of morphing stuff and it might help him infiltrate somewhere |
perla moon chapter 22 . 8/9/2019 Sssiiiggguuueeelllooo |
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 22 . 6/26/2019 Estoy de acuerdo con los gemelos es genial! Jajajajaja gracias voy a continuar leyendo |
Hollydoor chapter 11 . 3/4/2019 Didn't the first gym leader give them a box to store their badges? |
Wolfly2494 chapter 5 . 12/13/2018 For the team Larvitar, Gastly, Abra, Fearow vs (ash’ Pidgeot) and persian (of group of Meowth/Meowzie of episode 70 of season 1) |
Stormy1x2 chapter 14 . 7/25/2018 ...So is there anything Harry can't actually do? |
Face Yourself chapter 7 . 12/16/2017 This story is... kind of boring, really. It tries to move too fast and skip around, a lot of it feels formulaic and almost like episodes of a poorly thought out show rather than an actual story, and it's very repetitive - from the whole "it's an ability I have" thing, to the "meet gym leader before challenging them" thing, to the abundance of bloody shinies. And then there's the lack of actual training and somehow beating a gym in a third-badge battle while severely under-prepared... plus including characters from the pokemon anime, which is terrible and should never be considered canon for any sort of half-decent fic... stuff like that is just annoying. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 to toshirostalker because I'm a guest and I can't reply back to him (he might not read this but anyways, my argument to his suggestion...) That would make harry way too op. Which will affect the plotline and have him literally be a Kirito (basically winning eeevverrry single fight and rivals he meets.) I like your idea of having pokemons to signify his seven years in Hogwarts but LEGENDARY POKEMONS? Nuh uh. Boring. No character development at all since the characters and pokemon are already OP. Anyways toodles |
Shadow chapter 22 . 4/22/2017 This story is so awesome. You really did an awesome job in writing this. Thank you KaosRuin you've alleviated my boredom. |
Mo.auxier chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 I have been looking for this story for forever! I had it saved in my favorites when it was still the last title, but then it vanished and I was so upset! But now I've found it again! I will tell you that this is by far my favorite hp/Pokémon cross yet and I am so happy! Thank you for having put it back up! |
ShadowPhoenix121 chapter 22 . 4/13/2017 Are you going to do any more? This is a really good story. Are you going to do a part 2? I'd love that. |
Project Century chapter 7 . 7/29/2016 Cool |
Winter Anime Fan chapter 22 . 5/28/2016 One of my favourite stories, it's so much fun to read. |
Xovercrazy chapter 22 . 4/29/2016 god this is amazing goodjob and take a bow. |