Reviews for Protecting Jace
The dark soul chapter 42 . 7/15
Absolutely awesome and Lovely...
Please write more stories...
Genocide chapter 42 . 6/20
This was a masterpiece.

The plot was nice and the characters were so well done. Each of them played their roles perfectly and though I don't agree with Raphael and Julian being the terrorists (I just really like them), everything was great. Hell, even the spelling and grammar was great, which is more than I can say for 90% of fics.

And god, the Clace was freaking perfect. I swear, that's the most in-love Clace that I've ever read. Even after four reads, it still blows me away. They're more in love than BFB Dilemma, Covert Casanova (which you've made a neat little reference to), Turbulent, and even A Chance Meeting Between Enemies and Battle of the Bands, which are some of my favourites. (I really recommend those).

And of course, my favourite parts, the football team and the frat guys. Like hell, they're all such dorks and I freaking love them. They need more screen time, honestly.

So, why have I read this 4 times and am only reviewing now? Well, I'm reading this on my Kindle and it's a freaking pain in the ass to type on, so congratulations of being the first that has me writing you a review. Sorry that I don't review more. You definitely deserve more and I feel terrible for cheating you out of 41 other reviews.

So, answering some questions that I remember you asking:
1) Dog person, though I grew up with one so I might be biased
2) Dom Sherwood, though I do see where Matt fans are coming from
3) White. Just gives off a nice vibe, honestly.
4) (favourite song) Uh...Lost in Stereo/Toxic Valentine - All Time Low, Thank You For The Venom/Give Em' Hell, Kid- My Chemical Romance, anything from Folie à Deux - Fall Out Boy, Agree to Disagree - Sleeping With Sirens, 21 Questions - Waterparks, Bleed it Out - Linkin Park, Keeper of Lust - Persona 5 OST (I recommend the cover by FamilyJules), Boulevard of Broken Dreams - Green Day (though I swear everyone knows that song) and Icarus/Archers - With Confidence.
Simran Kaur chapter 42 . 6/15
OOOO MYYYY GODDDD! I can’t even start to describe that how amazing this fanfic was️️ May it be the storyline or the plot or be it the action sequence or the romance or the friendship or the emotional side of the story it was just amazinggggg I just simply can’t get over it like the perfect start the perfect story and definitely the perfect end...it’s just that no amount of words can satisfy my giddiness and that feeling I’m having after reading this...honestly it’s just so amazing and I personally can’t get over it...simply LOVED IT️️️️️
MagnusBane343 chapter 29 . 5/12
SIMON! I am one of the most neediest people I have ever met. Keep up the good work! :)
eclecticfandomer chapter 19 . 5/1
Just a quick question: how much do you know about target shooting and live shooting? I say this just because, in all of my lessons of competitive rifle shooting and learning how to shoot pistols and other hand guns (and a detour into archery), ive always been told to focus one eye on the sights and the points at which youre aiming. I only say this because the further the target is away from our eyes, the more important it is to focus only one eye as our eyes are looking inward and narrowing that cone of direct sight. Shit im not explaining this well. Anyways heres what im trying to say: since our eyes are apart from one another focusing on something in the middle of them leads to wierd shit happening with depth perception. When our depth perception goes to shit our ability to aim does as well. The further away the target is, the longer the projectile you are shooting has to veer off course due to faulty aim due to faulty depth perception (this is why, when you first begin shooting you work with a blinder. A blinder forces your non blinded eye to focus and become dominate. It can also be hard to switch back). Also onto the stance thing. Usually you have one foot on front of the other (BUT STILL SHOLDER-WIDTH APART) to help with the recoil (i dont care how long you have been shooting or if youre just shooting a baby .22 say it with me now: EVERY GUN HAS A RECOIL BECAUSE ITS PHYSICS PEOPLE). Placing your feel like this also allows for quicker and easier movement (a shit ton of volleyball drills have taught me that). This also helps your eye to focus because the gun is positioned in front of it in line with your dominant eyes sholder. Now I could be wrong but both experience and a shit loaf of practice are telling me otherwise. (Also wtf how did this get so long...?). Anyways except for this (and this is minor/non existent to like... 99.999999% of the population) i frickin love your story. Its super good!

~EC
Guest chapter 32 . 4/14
needles
BM15 chapter 40 . 3/23
YES
BM15 chapter 33 . 3/23
Sagittarius and proud!
BM15 chapter 24 . 3/23
Matt for sure. Love Dom tho
BM15 chapter 21 . 3/23
C.A.T.S
A.R.E
T.H.E
B.E.S.T
fifespice chapter 5 . 2/12
he he love it
fifespice chapter 4 . 2/12
he he serves him right but why do i get the feeling this wont end up as just a job for our agent
fifespice chapter 2 . 2/12
should be interesting
fifespice chapter 1 . 2/12
ooh intrigue so is she like a secret service agent type thing
Serennos chapter 42 . 1/31
Wow. What a talent you have. Thank you so much for this. Please write more Clace when you can...
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