Reviews for Disbelief
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2019
Dear god it’s amazing
devilnightking100 chapter 1 . 4/19/2019
This is what people mean when they say "Beware the anger of a gentle man" or in this case skeleton. Also, chills at the last two lines.
RapidSammi chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
YEAH! THE READER DESERVES IT!

Even though I am the reader... I never played undertale though, but even if I had I wouldn't kill. Nonetheless, I am the reader x3

Haha... Enjoy your stay in HELL, reader... hahahaahahahahahaha!
*RapidSammi has gone insane.
vicente chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
nonononon
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
I LOVED IT!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
jfc pap take it easy ya lil dip
save ur energy for the sphagettyyyy
TheEnchantedGamer chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
How do I play the game?
big smoke chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
10/outta ten would read agai
Romulus Black Talon chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
I had such a GREAT TIME reading this. Wish there was more, but it dosent really need it
Kelly chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
Ooh, nice! I like it! XD
aicia.dayle chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
:3 I want to see the end of the battle now
Aruba Bloom chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
This is me in this moment

Me: *tears falling down my face as I dodge papyrus's attacks* I don't want this to continue so...*points knife to head*

Papyrus: HUH?! HUMAN WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! *stops attacking*

Me: isn't this what you wanted? I was thinking about this for a long while, and I'm going to reset everything, so I can do better next time, next time...I will never hurt anyone, next time I won't even think of hurting anyone.

Papyrus: *orange tears form in his eyes*

Me: *smiles at papyrus* I'm DETERMINED to have a happy ending, I love you...big bro *stabs self in the head*

*RESET*
Duwee Davis II chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
There are a few misspellings and malapropers, such as 'PROTEC' instead of 'PROTECT', 'beings' instead of 'begins', 'weaver' instead of 'waver'.
AeroJester203 chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
Well, if nothing else, this will prevent Frisk from pulling a full Genocide Run. All the better in my opinion. Good story!
SilverHeart1821 chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
I enjoyed reading this. I haven't really read an AU where Papyrus attacks you instead of Sans, but this was really good. Awesome job at this.
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