Aww, it was such a great read. Awesome job.

I think it took Beca so long to admit her feelings because they scared her. And it scared Chloe at the thought of losing Beca, so yes the conversation in the end needed to be done sober. And we saw jealousy from both of them, so the characterisation of them both was well done.

I love it. That's hwat I think. It is so bloody awesome. Love the growth over time. The feelings seem so raw, powerful. Great writing. Thanks heaps for sharing

sooo cute i love it

amazing !

Kudos. You did well. I felt really sympathetic towards Beca, which you should probably consider an accomplishment. Nice job- keep writing, ok? :)

This was the sweetest. It's about damn time Beca got her head out of her ass!

This was an amazing story! Hope to see you writing more

So very, very good

This is just so cute. I'd love to read anymore ideas that you've written ;))