| Reviews for Speak Your Dark Pleasures to Me |
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Varanus salvator chapter 14 . 12/4/2018 This is amazing af and i absolutely crave it XD |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/8/2018 “Shit or Titans” Well then... we should be worried then... |
TheNotSoTalentedPoet chapter 1 . 2/17/2017 I kind of wish there was more here, as I cannot leave a review that isn't somewhat long in good conscience, and shorter works generally give me less to mention. Don't take that as me bitching or anything, cux I know it's your style, and you definitely make it work. It's more my own neuroses than anything else. Moving on, I should preface this by saying that I don't really ship these two. It's not a NOTP, but it's not something I really see as viable, even if I've only seen the anime. That being said, I think this does a good job of portraying them as a couple in a manner I can believe. Obviously neither of them is going to be sickening lovey-dovey with the other, though Levi will always be the stoic, taciturn grump in any interpersonal relationship, and that shows here. The bit from Levi's perspective certainly felt in-character, however brief it was. The obvious thing to note is his aversion to the unclean sheets, but even his few lines of dialogue felt like what would Levi would say in that moment. Succinct, blunt, and direct, in three words. Really nothing more to say, cuz it was short and as effective as it could possibly be considering the brevity. As far as Hanji is concerned, the fact that it was wordier served as a good contrast, as she's the naturally chattier of the two. I don't know for sure if that was a conscious decision on your part, but it works. Her analysis of the situation she awakes to find herself in also fits her character, especially when she imagines documenting her observations. As far as a general feel is concerned, I like how this seems like a short, sweet snapshot of their relationship. The prose (what little there is) isn't particularly purple or beige, and it does its job without standing out too terribly much. Really, the only issue I had with this was the last paragraph. I understand why you would want to reveal that information early on, but as it is, it's telling, and while that isn't uniformly terrible, especially if the secrecy of their relationship isn't some major factor, I think you could have put off making that aspect known until a later installment as opposed to tacking it on to the end of the first chapter like an afterthought. It's nothing major, but that's the only thing I find to be objectionable here. In short, I liked this. The fact that I don't ship them should make my enjoyment seem more impactful, but either way, you did well. |
schizelle chapter 14 . 2/7/2017 I like this. It maybe 'modern au garbage' but it is adorable. Particularly because it draws a neat comparison between how vastly different Hanji and Levi are in character. Levi listening to classical music/opera and rap seems like such an odd combination but at the same time, it fits him so well! ! I love how you describe different media forms and their preferences before delving into the plot (ish) part of the drabble. Hanji analysing the song is so cute! c3 Very nice! |
tryke14 chapter 14 . 2/6/2017 Bash 'em and smash 'em XD listened to Centipede, and it is hilarious and awesome! |
AliceW chapter 13 . 4/3/2016 Ohhhhhhh i like this one ! Hanji and Levy are definitly a great couple ! |
Guest chapter 13 . 2/13/2016 Ch:13: Oooh please make more of this, levi is so sweet, and he love her a lot, hehehe You story so funny,:D continue plz. and English not my language sorry :)))) |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/13/2016 Ch:12: soooooo cuteeeee hehehe. |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/13/2016 Ch:11:? I don't want to thank about levi do this*Blushing* |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/13/2016 More importantly, they are now together, and alive :'') |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/13/2016 Levi is dad ,, I love the idea :-D |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/13/2016 Ch8: really good story i like levi jealous so much, do more of this please :-) Frankly, I do not like when some people exaggerate about cases of neglect of hygiene at Zoe, well she is doing this so only when she are very busy, and also i hate when they make her a very pervert person in many cases, the reason I left LeviHan some time. Thanks dear :)))))) |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13/2016 I like zoe's hair too it's pretty much ; D |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/13/2016 Zoe you so sweet :)))) And levi you a big stupid :(((( But i still love them together ; D |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/13/2016 Hahaha soooo cute i like that little spoon & big spoon ; D levi you short that mean you the little spoon ;)))) |