I'm a pervert and I LOVED this.

Whoa clearly didn't expect that o.O

Now I'm the one who feels silly for not checking the rating :P

Well anyway, Kana-chan is so naughty...or is it Yuki-chan? ;) The story's really nice; it's fun, sweet and *phew* a little...hot :P

Nice one Major OwO7

Nice story.

Kinda alm over the place but still its a positive one and brings a smile from the way she watches her sister leave the pool to the end where they enjoy themselves.

Granted not much for wrestling call outs unless its the Hitman, but great overall.

Very good story, and this does not need any lemon. It tastes good anyway... Innuendo is the best under these circumstances.

9.8/10

WtTA

Exelente trabajo

Nice story you have :-)

(hearts in her eyes as she puts her hands on her cheeks) WOOOOOOWW~! You finally did it! I'm very impressed! And you even added Yuripee into the story, which made it even more enjoyable~! That's super amazing!

And oh, my gosh! I love how you added Yuki-chan wearing her swimsuit under her school uniform. Hehe~! That's so sweet and cute at the same time!

Thanks so much for writing this for me, Mikey-kun~! Your stories always bring a smile to my face. Keep it up! ;)

You clearly seem to have some fun with the way you write your stories XD you just go all into it, even when they aren't getting into any sex scenes, although all of that stuff about Yukino's butt at the end was quite a lovely scene. I dunno if they'd just from saying Japanese words when technically they're already speaking Japanese all the time since they ARE Japanese, but I guess if it works, it works.