I really loved this story from the characters to the plot. I never bothered reviewing this until now but this was one of the stories that inspired me to make a story of my own. I hope it means something to you.

needs a sequel

ok, which human had which soul? im mixed up.

plot twist everthing that happened was in the real world dun dun duuuuuuun

jerry is right for once 1 point for Jerry 0 points for chill drake he's a asshole

top ten anime fights this was epic

...WHAT.
Okay. It started off normal. Then... Well, then things just plain went off the expected track. Then this happened
THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME.
ALL. OF. IT.

Well, this story has been pretty intriguing so far, if rather sad at times. Tell me, how was Flowey already around before any of the souls fell down?

I guess Frisk made it a cold day in Hotland then, at least in terms of Undyne logic.

Thank you for this story. This is an amazing story, and although it may not be very accurate, I'm sure it's still one of the better stories I've read. The way you made the characters come to life (figuratively, of course) was amazing. The way the story felt so realistic, it was great. I cried real tears, and I'm positive you will do good when you write future stories like this. For this, I acknowledge you as a better writer, a better author. Thank you for this story! ~

Good... But Bonnie dying sadly killjoyed the mood.
Not that this is a bad story. Your writing skills are spot on and you clearly worked hard so kudos to you.
But why did Bonnie have to die? The other humans were still young and healthy as the day they fell into the underground and got reunited with their families?
The way you wrote the story, she can't have been that old when she left frisk. And karmically speaking Bonnie had a right to live as she actually tried to stop chara and save humanity. Also frisks entire journey was wasted and all for naught. Who will tuck our poor hero into bed now and give him his goodnight kiss he so richly deservees after what he's been through. Please can someone explain why Bonnie died when the other souls lived in the comments or otherwise or was this all done to spite poor frisk. Otherwise congrats your a great writer and I really appreciate your efforts. But that unfair unexplained death left a sour taste. Thanks。

This was a great story. I enjoyed every chapter and the detail you put in the human and monster characters. The motivation behind some of the characters actions was well detailed and it made the characters feel more real.

I especially liked Christa, Anthony and Bonnie. As a person who has Asperger Syndrome, I think you did a really respectful job of writing and describing Frisk. Also my last name happens to be McCoy, so I got a real good kick when I read Bonnie's last name.

I tip my hat off to you for that.

This story was just enjoyable to read. :)

Merry Christmas!

"She didn't feel beautiful enough to put it around her head. Maybe the white girls in town would have looked good in it, but she didn't feel that way." That was, by far, the most tactful yet painful way to introduce a character's ethnicity I've ever seen.

I always love seeing other people's takes on the Six Humans and how they might have interacted with the Underground. Hope (a name that's maybe a bit -too- fitting) is a strong start to these characters, especially her reason for attacking and killing two monsters. It was screwed up and made my stomach churn, especially when she was reminded of the feeling while eating the snails, which is hopefully what you were going for. Her backstory and reason for climbing Mt. Ebbot were also solid.

I wanted to like how Toriel interacted with the first human she'd seen since Chara, but in the context of the canon, unfortunately, it has some flaws. The thought of her being more open to letting humans go and not being as insanely protective is an attractive idea-a way of showing how her character has developed after losing so many human children-but would she really have been so willing to let Hope go? The whole reason she's alone in the Ruins is because she was disgusted with Asgore's plan to take the souls of any other humans that fell down, so would she really be willing to let a human, let alone a child, leave so easily? If not for that, admittedly, major detail, Torial and Hope's interactions would have wonderfully captured their respective personalities.

I liked how Hope got through the puzzles without just repeating the gameplay, the explanation for why the Ruins exit is one-way (my headcanon is that it was made that way to prevent humans from invading), and Sans being the one to take Hope out, making good on his promise of "You'd be dead where you stand." There was definitely thought put into this story, as these show, but I wish there had been more thought put into the big picture, as it were.

Also, this is something I've noticed across all of your stories: you keep using "it's" when you mean to use the possessive "its." It's confusing, I know, but just remember that the apostrophe in "it's" is replacing the "i" in "is."

That was just a wave of emotions that sang to my heart! I couldn't stop reading it, I loved it to pieces.