Impressive really. This wasn’t done to be sexy, or even directly sensual really. It was an extremely intense look into a dark place that can be so real.

Please be aware of some spoilers ahead

You did a really good job, and I agree with some of the other reviewers about continuing on with the piece and delving deeper into Emma’s psyche a bit while this continues to progress, as I’m sure her behavior would more than likely slip back into the methods she had used in her past. It would be interesting to see how Emma deals with this darkness as an adult, especially since I’m sure she more than likely thought she would never have to ever deal with it again once she was out of the foster care system.

While I simply can't imagine Snow to be like this... always those people you never expect to, do such things. Gah, this is... the reality.
Uhm, and about your piece... it's good. Sickly good. You know the drill..

This was really good I love seeing a dark side to Snow like that. Reading it feels sinfully wrong but it's deliciously tempting.

I really enjoyed this story.

This was incredibly intense and fulfilling for such a short story. I want to see Emma stay a Good Girl for her mother and keep quietly accepting it right down to the last possible lesbian sex act, with the assurance that Snow will never, ever stop. You might want to continue this- I've seen some interesting suggestions here. Thank you.
-EbnyLvrBryan, via mobile phone.

This was so impressive. It wasn't sexy, it was dark and twisted. This was so amazing the Dark!Snow was so intense and the way you wrote Emma's discomfort and uncertainty was fantastic.

I love this pairing

oh shit. This was crazy good. that's some pretty intense dark!snow, and I loved it. I felt the uneasiness that Emma was feeling-i felt that in my bones. Good job. And I'm really going to have to read your other stories now. UGH.

You should continue this.

I never expected this. How about Mulan and Emma. Think you can do that?

oooh, I enjoyed this one. Can you do a sequel or more chapters? Because I want more!

redswan where it's wolf time and ruby's wolf is running free, demanding to seek its mate to mate, but ruby doesn't know who that is. she hasn't had a love since peter. the wolf leads her to emma and their sex is explosive. maybe g!p where ruby channels her wolf and knots inside emma, and ruby has to tell emma afterwards that she probably got her pregnant.

could you write an established swanqueen where emma reveals her mommy!kink and regina surprises emma by bringing snow into their bedroom activities?

Interesting One-shot! I've never read a Snow/Swan before.

Wow!
You have to write more chapters, seriously!