If Ginny was a new-born, she wouldn't be crawling. This chapter just seemed to be a copy of previous material with little to nothing new. Rather disappointing.

Well, it is noticeable that you fell out of love with the story. It is rather cliche'd at times, and inconsistent at others, in particular when it comes to Ron. But you've finished it nevertheless, that's got to count for something.

Yikes - someone did an Obliviation - and more than one. Hermione was NOT the only person Obliviated. Molly didn't recall it, either - and she was there. Amelia knows the law; which is why she told Hermione's mother - basically, Amelia was, in fact, stuck for it. The Potters almost certainly left wills - and we KNOW they were sealed - and who sealed them. Everything points to Dumbles - but why? The Potters were alive; had Trelawney given the Prophecy already?

Not very good couldn't get past first two chapters. Ron attacks and literally almost kills harry. But they pass over that like its nothing and then theirs the oh I've passed out, oh no I've passed out, oh look I've passed out again. It's repetitive breaks the flow of the story and doesn't server to further or enrich the narrative. If he needed to pass out once was plenty twice was also good three times is when I stop reading. Then you have the bad dialog sometimes Harry sounds like a love sick puppy then in the same chapter his sounds like a depressed guilt ridden teen pick one. He can't go from one emotion to the next like a kaleidoscope its confusing.

Poor Vernon - he has Absolutely Zero Idea the leverage Dudley (via Harry/Ginny/Susan) has over him. Dudley/witch is no surprise - except that it's Cho Chang. A Reformed!Dudley is not new, either - see "What Nargles Can Do".

I don't get where everyone thinks that Death Eaters got away. In the books it states that all the DEs were swept up in the attack by the residents of Hogsmeade and forced into Hogwarts and the Great Hall where they were all over come, either killed or captured.

While Harry was Sirius' Godson and heir, he wasn't related by blood and therefore the contract should not have passed to him but through the Black line so that it would have fallen to Draco, not Harry.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

Please write an Epilogue already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

I won't read the story because the summary turns me off. Giving feedback however may improve your writing and attract me to your stories in the future.

The Battle of Hogwarts may NOT OF ended, but it may HAVE ended, and life may NOT OF changed, it may HAVE changed however.

"of" and "have" are NOT interchangeable at the author's discretion. My English is far from perfect, I know that, but this error is putting me off like very few others.

Love it as always and can't wait for the next update

Love it as always and can't wait for the next update

Susan Bones never lost her parents. She had a family and she did not live with her Aunt Amelia.

And Yay marriage contract with Susan Bones! :)

Um dude. Fabian and Giddeon Prewwit were killed In the summer of 1981, when Harry was a year old. How could James and Lily have possibly been "just engaged" when James and Lily were married in either the Fall of 1978 or, at the latest, the Summer of 1979.

Nice try though. But please fix it please. As a massive Harry Potter fan, these kind of mistakes bother me immensely. I'm sorry, I can't help it. O.o

On anothrr note, I'm glad that it's a three-way with Susan Bones. :)

May HAVE, not May OF