Reviews for Temptation
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2017
Good
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2017
Good nice
Guest chapter 4 . 9/21/2016
Hi I just wanted to say the story is really good and I think you should still continue the story
INLOVE chapter 3 . 3/19/2016
I like how this is going and I can't wait to see what happens next!

I love how you make it reasonable why Vicky readily stops Timmy from hoping. Timmy is younger to her and it really adds plus points to me. I ship Vicky and Timmy, I also believe age doesn't matter in love but I'm just glad that their love didn't continuously blossom mainly because of sexual appearance. I like to see them develop and see how it will lead them both.

Also,this has some suspense in it and I wonder what kind of felony this would be.
Please do continue!
ASRAULERSON chapter 3 . 1/25/2016
you really need to finish this story. come on man you just killed my vibe. I was enjoying that
Guest chapter 2 . 11/10/2015
Dude I love it, please continue!
neosword7 chapter 2 . 11/12/2015
aarrrrrh! just read chapter 2 you're evil! cutting of like this! XD i realy like the story
neosword7 chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
i'm druk brt lov tis tlk me xp
FMAlover32 chapter 2 . 11/8/2015
Oh damn what's up with Marcel? #foreboding
Anyway great story so far! Update soon!