Nice!

I'm enjoying this story so far, it's different from the other humour fics I have read. I first encountered this story not too long after it was published, and patiently awaited a new chapter... 2 years later a new chapter comes out. C'mon, try to be faster with updates, man! This is good. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for chapter 3... when it comes out _

2 years. When's the next one? 400 years later?

James name was misspelled, but that was a good chapter, I have an idea for the next chapter, what if the hole takes them to a school covered in blood?

Haha, that was fun to read! Clearly looking forward another chapter XD

Hilarious to read. James's deep, deep denial about Mary made me laugh, and I love your portrayal of Henry and Heather. Please do continue it.

/snort pretty damn hilarious! I'm actually looking forward to the next.

The script format is something strange, but your writing is really good. ...sorry, no offence intended. Usually people who use script format have really bad writing. Yours is good though!

Ah.. Don't overuse it though!(now is fine) I might be wrong, but I heard something about script format being banned or highly discouraged, or something...