Ok so looking forward to where the whole club thing will go.
As for Hermoine, she is not exactly the most mature person in cannon either.
I like rhr too. Yeah they were not exactly enjoyable to read in 6th book but they were really cute in 7th one ,they were much more mature and open with their feelings.
I know Hermoine was harsh on him after he came back but honestly the fight was not her and Harry were responsible.

I am looking forward to the troll incident and how you bring Hermoine into the picture

Daphne/Ron interaction was interesting.I can see them becoming good friends and maybe help gryffindoors and slytherins get along .
I see you are making Neville a part of the group.

You must certainly did justice to his sorting

Nothing much to say. All around amazing chapter.
Just be sure to not make Hermoine into film Hermoine
She is a good witch but her talent is not at the same level as Dumbledore or Tom riddle or Snape

Amazing chapter
The way you are writing the relationship between his brothers and ron is incredible
The thing is i never thought Ron cared much about glory. He obviously loved it.
But the thing his insecurities really was rooted in believing his loved ones did not care from him.
I would love to see how this affect Ron

Amazing chapter
His relationship with his brothers and Ginny is something I look forward to.
Ron has one major flaw in this fic- Insecurity.
That is something his antagonist should exploit.
Also keep in mind, in this universe things are different so surely plans of voldemort could be different.

Loved the chapter. The only critic I have is that i think the angst and visions were a bit exaggerated.

I agree. I love Ron but he only works hard when he has to. So, if he really wants to bring change he has to use his skills to be better.(Percy can help him there)You gave him the right motivation too that is saving his friends and family.
As for romance i would love to see where you take this. Ron said he wanted to settle with Hermoine.
If you want I would love to beta read.

So he goes back to an alternate reality.

Amazing start to the story.

This is probably my favourite Ron time travel story ever! I love the way you write him, and all the other characters.

This story is fantastic! I was legit shaking when reading the chess match, and after he went back, his dilemmas and choices are really intriguing. And the rest of them are absolutely adorable.

Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Mate... how’s the chapter going? I’m waitinggggggggg

Please update soon I literally check everyday for a new update... so please!

So glad you updated... Really waiting for the next one.