I like your choice of making it in 2nd person, it does make it feel like you're in her head & that she's in her head. And she's pretty much in her head, a lot. It does feel sort of condensed though. and short (I would've liked more! but hey, I'll take what I can get :P) I also like the (sort of) emphasis on names, Iroh's and Korra's you had.

Lovely so far! Please update soon