| Reviews for Abyss's Unsung Melody |
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   LittleWolf689 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016 as far as i could see. there were mistakes i saw, the 1st one is where Sasha says "Why, are you going to confess to her?" don't put a comma (,) in front of "Why" put a question mark (?). Next one was where it said "Chungsmiled" you forgot a space. 3rd was right after you talked about the candles two parts there you got wrong (but i'm counting it as one) you didn't spell Ashia right i forgot the last a and the other part of these two parts was you forgot a space. Again. so yeah as far as i could see those were the things you got wrong. |
| EveTheGuest chapter 21 . 3/15/2016 Nice plot though I suggest you increase how much you wrote. |
| AGuest chapter 21 . 3/8/2016 You are so creative, love the fanfic. |
| FlamingChaser chapter 3 . 2/25/2016 OMG Aisha was engaged to Chung?! |
| FlamingChaser chapter 2 . 2/25/2016 Yay, ElswordxAisha |
| FlamingChaser chapter 1 . 2/25/2016 Your book is just too awesome to explain...:) |
| InsideaDemon chapter 17 . 2/6/2016 I wanna to read mor these awesome chapters! |
| TheDarkenIllusions chapter 14 . 1/24/2016 Chungie to da rescue. |
| TheDarkenIllusions chapter 15 . 1/24/2016 EVIL CHUNNG |
| TheDarkenIllusions chapter 16 . 1/24/2016 Ooh, who is the captain?! O.O |
| IntrovertedRabbit chapter 14 . 1/10/2016 Woah! Amazing but I must ask for more Aishie xd |
| Yoshida-kun chapter 13 . 1/9/2016 Dang it with all these cliffhangers! ... Oh well, might as well head over to the other and put this on my reading list XP |
| Merlisa chapter 11 . 12/30/2015 Please make more |
| Timid Oreo chapter 11 . 12/27/2015 but wouldn't Add killing Ciel mean that Lu dies too? |
| Timid Oreo chapter 10 . 12/26/2015 is Pensito an OC? |
