ah! no! this can't be the last chapter, I need to know what happens next and what happens with Laurel and foxy and if everything has a happy ending!

Just...wow. I honestly wasn't expecting much from this story (based on most of the drivel that's on here for FNAF) and you've blown those expectations out of the water. I'm so happy you've decided to share your storytelling with the world and I hope you continue to write! I look forward to what comes next!

wait "dammed" is swearing? is this a Christian Server?

I've only made it to chapter 7 so far but dang this is a really good story!

Please tell me her mom isn't going to suffer like her?

Well, you certainly do a good job at making this fic fun, though maybe I'm just a sucker for William. Speaking of, since you changed his name in the middle of the fanfic, I suggest you go back to the early chapters and replace all the Vincent with William. It was a little jarring for me for it to change like that, because I have a different view of what William is versus what Vincent is. Does that make sense? Anyways, judging by Springtrap's planning and the way he still makes attachments to people like a "normal" person, he is more likely to be a psychopath rather than a sociopath. Maybe do some research and see if it is necessary for you to change it? Cuz I think it is important to identify such things correctly! :D Overall though, I can't wait to read more 3

My favourite FNAF fanfic its perfect the characters are amazing and tbe plot draws you in! Please update you have an amazing story and awesome talent

... HOLLLLLLY FFFFFF*** this is the best story I have ever read! I NEED MORE! I love it!

Good god your such an amazing writer 0.o kinda makes me jealous XD

When ill you make more?

This is a good story
Update please

Fabulous story, well written and great. I hope to see more soon! Laurel is like a poor frightened doe,

Hmm interesting but if I'm honest it feels like it's leaning to your typical love story with all those bumps in the road that only seem to test or strengthen the love relation between two characters. I'm not saying it's bad, not at all, all I'm saying is, for me at least, it feels a bit too typical
That said I wouldn't discourage other people from reading it.
Still, good work I hope you can keep it up in later chapters
Rubix out