I like this take.

this was great! I almost wish this was how it went in the movie!

Goddamn, that was beautiful and I love how you ended this. The depth of The King and Queen was well written and I think you really captured their personalities, especially the Kings.
"Then you and I will have an outlaw for an in-law"
"You and your horrible puns"
Haha! Loved it

This is good

Really loved this! A very unique twist from the movie!

I really like the way you used the kings POV. Not many writers have done that and the few that I've seen didn't do as well as you did. You did an exceptional job with this piece. It had a pleasent twist that I didn't expect, which is one of the many reasons why I love this Fic.
Great job, keep up the good work!
(I'm defiantly adding this fic to my favourites as soon as I log in!)