I cant believe u killed bree I hate you

I hate you less because you gave that poor sweet broken gremlin palmer his babe back

uhhhhhhhh I doubt those three would be that cold and heartless. ouch.

As much as i liked the start its going down hill fast with how you are making the others act and on top of that going after jimmys family its all very pathetic and taking focus of what SHOULD be the actual focus witch is tonys lose and the death of another innocent baby.

Going after jimmys baby is a clear sign Tony and HIS story will no longer be main focus like it should be.

This is a really sad story but I will still like it

Your writing is very immature - the actual prose would disgrace a twelve-year-old and the characterization resembles wooden dolls - but once you grow up it should improve.

I like your views on ncis. Except McGee and abby are not really evil. But bishop is a real poopoohead.

Tony has another little girl! I love him and Ziva together, especially with a child or two. And YAY that Lonnie is Mollie and alive.

Glad for Tony and Gibbs!

That isn't even Tony's fault, stupid Senior is a mean jerk

Poor Jimmy! And poor Tony too!

Stupid Tessie. I hope Gibbs gets a hold of her and makes her pay

I love how kind Vance is being, and I love that Gibbs is firmly in protective daddy mode.

Great story. Sorry now I did not take the time to read it when you posted it. Glad Tony is so happy now. Off now to catch up on the sequel.

I thought I had read this but guess not. You have me really engaged in your story.

Such a great ending! Loved,loved,loved it! Keep up the amazing writing!