Delightful and disturbing in equal measure.

Shame the story is abandoned; I liked the uniqueness of the setting and the meeting of cultures between the two 'civilizations'. Still - thank you for writing it! I greatly enjoyed reading it.

Noice

love it!

Am I to understand that in this setting humans breeding with asari somehow creates an alternative to the outcome of asari breeding with anything else?

I don't know how ambiguous you intended this chapter to be, but the situation screamed xenomorph (alien franchise) until the character's reaction to the couple. Hell, I didn't even know that the subject was asari until quite a ways in. It was a very uncomfortably confusing read.

Amazing fic! The storyline with Klein and the team was particularly amazing mainly because the humor of the main character was right up my alley, love it! Also made me want to go back and play the secret world again :D

great new chapter!

Somewhat interesting, and the maidens were cute, but I think this story is suffering from a lack of coherence, chapter to chapter.

Mind you, I can't really remember the earlier chapters, but I feel like there are too many POV shifts and not enough of a red thread, tying them together.

Well, you made work a lot harder today. Great read. I look forward to your next chapter.

this is great

So good. I love how this story explores the interactions between the two universes beyond the usual 'Humanity vs the aliens' most fics just turn into.

AWESOME! I LOVE YOUR RETURN :)

I'm enjoying this story quite a bit. The use of OCs to show multiple sides to the interactions between Gaians and Citadelites (That's a word now.) is working very well, and keeps arc fatigue from developing while still keeping the getting-to-know-Fifth-Age-Gaians angle.

My only nitpick is that, in Mass Effect, Quarians and Turians have different amino acids, meaning they can't eat (and might even be poisoned by) other species' food, while humans, Salarians, Asari, Krogans, Batarians, etc. can still eat each others food, but would suffer adverse effects from Turian/Quarian food. There were some mentions of a Turian restaurant (A bit ambiguious, as humans of Gaia might have become able to metabolize different chemicals during whatever made them all capable of ghosting.) on Lluvia and a Turian merc eating an Asari cake (Looks like a mistake unless the Asari restaurant carries Turian food just to spite their competitors.), so this piece of ME world-building is kind of overlooked there. It's barely noticeable elsewhere, but did dwell on my mind a bit.

This is an excellent story. I hope you end up writing more.

This, this is fuckin' excellent stuff my friend. I've been looking for good "Humans are Cthulu"-type fics, and I must say, this is FIIINE stuff. Love the arcs, your characters are pretty good and lifelike, all in all, keep it up.

interesting chapter, guessing a new arc is about to begin?