How that was so interesting to read I like reading it.

You need to get the fuck on with it and stop with all of the stupid, needless and time wasting exposition crap.

I just ran across this well written story, May 19, 2020. It has a good read and has a well thought out twist toward the end. LLGuido

You know, the theory of a dopleganger is very plausible, specially with the Albus Severus name of the second son. Srly!

wow this tale has one heck of a twist!

I actually enjoyed this. Never saw the twist coming and it was excellently written. Thank you

Great story.

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Intriguing twist to HP canon. You write so well and your stories are always a good read.

Shocking! Hermione is so thick!

I have really enjoyed this story. It is one of the few female Harry stories I have enjoyed since most are a way for a writer to write a slash story and be able to say it isn’t. The gender change in this story actually contributes to the plot rather than a device for a lazy writer. Given the way the story is built up the final pairing for Harry seems to fit, rather than some of the more contrived pairings I have seen. It is also a plot twist that I did not see coming (and so many are overused to the point they are predictable). Keep up the good work.

An amazing and different type of story! Very unique!

Poor Hermione. So Dumbledore didn't really mess with her core personality, just tweaked it for his own purposes.

Well that's an interesting twist. Several, actually.

Weirdly consistent complot thinking. Nicely done. The wizarding word is terribly dangerous with all those possibilities for undetected mind control for both individuals and groups of people. Add to that major flaws in both legislation and justice system and there you have a dystopia. Thank you for sharing.