This is very interesting! Now we finally get to see how Jewel ended up in the aviary and Tulio getting her. Loved it! But at the same time...

It was really sad and touching if you talk about from Jewel's view that is.

And also, I think the ending got cut off or something...

It's so... Outstanding! I am speechless with how you outline the story and the grammars... It's so perfect! I mean, I can't find a small error in this particular story. Besides, the story itself has a very good impression like your writing style. I loved the way how you show Tulio's impression before the movie. Anyways, hope you can improve more and as always, peace out. :)

Nice backstory. But I think you're missing something out after December 24th.