Am I only one who thinks if they did that to me I would physically be pissed at him like Riki, even after three years of training

I really loved this story! Thank you so much! I love Riki and Iason together and you brought a new element of a different setting that was phenomenal! I saw there is a sequel and was hoping to read it but see it’s not complete and hasn’t been worked on in awhile. Hope you haven’t discontinued it! That would be such a waste for this story! I hope to see you back soon! Thank you again for a great read!

I love all of your story but why, why and why did you have to kill Jak?:(

It's a good story, and a good concept, but how about a little critique? There are too many times jumps and it is ultimately confusing. Keep things going with a steady flow, not jumping from one character being in the room to two in the next second. Have Iason call Daryl into the room, and tell your readers he's there and why. Good luck

Wow. I love this, and if you tell me you're not a award winning author, then the world has gone mad! This is so amazing and mind blowing, I can't believe that it's FanFiction...everything was so alive! I'm envious, your writing is everything that I want mine to become :)
I'm looking forward to reading more!

omg the story was so good. I nearly u make new stories of ai no kusabi

Ok, so I WAS going to wait till the end, but I just couldn't. I absolutely LOVE this, it's so rotten and horrible...it's amazing! Oh by that I mean the characters personalities, I haven't been this envested in the characters in a LONG time. Your writing is that good! It blows me away, but I can't make myself hate anybody really, except maybe the slave sellers in the beginning. But each character has such depth and detail to em...I love how you are descriptive to a point, where I can stomach it, but still get the gruesome picture. Keep up the great work!

We need more of this pleeeease

banzaiiiiiii!

love that :)

uh,,,,,,,,, cheessssyyyyyyyyyyy~
but i like that,,,,,,,

i wanna see the real of him,,,,,,,

Thank you for writing this story! I am looking forward to the next installment and spin off!

good ending thanks

Nice ending. I have to comment on how impressed I am by how well you closed up even the smaller details in the story. Most people leave something hanging, even if it's just something small that's easily overlooked. Very well written! :)

"this is not a goodbye, its see you later" the 'end' to a fairytale is never the end but the beginning to what hides multiple doors with different outcomes. I had just read the last chapter and asked if it was the end then two minutes late you posted this chapter, I had to laugh. till next time my friend.