I LOVE this story so far! The characters are very canon in their writing and I enjoy Obi-Wan and Miri's interactions very much. Solid chemistry. My only criticism is that maybe you should have waited to release the flashback of her mother's POV until after Miriam finds out who she is really. It kind of lessened the tension by getting that information of her being a Jedi so early in the story. Can't wait to read more.

you did such a good job on this story. you were true to the universe and included your original characters well.

So Obi didn't bust out his lightsaber and slaughter everyone?

Good I suppose. Would be a bit OOC if he had.

Quite enjoyable, keep up the hard work

I enjoyed reading this story, it held my attention which is hard to do. I usually get bored after the first few chapters unless the plot is really good. I only have one criticism, your use of the word too. Too meas as well or also as in "I like it too" not " This is to much" otherwise it was great.

Thank you for sharing this story it is very well written and polished! Its been a fun read so far can't wait to see how it all pans out for our Obi and Miri! :D

This is my 4th or 5th time reading this fic and I still think it’s my favourite obi-wan fic out there!

Very well written story. I loved the concept and look forward to more of your work.

This is a great story! I really like it

Ahh, what a great little ending! The use of Dex was fab! :)

Very well done

Very exciting ending to this..feeling very satisfied and looking forward to more

So happy to see this update, and to see Obi-Wan and Miri back together! I loved this chapter (and Dex!)

Can't wait to read more!

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Excellent work yes Star wars is definitely dimmer she is now one with the force

Great job...so glad Dex got in there and they're reunited!