good story

Man that's sad I feel really sorry for them

Oh my god…he died?!
I wont blame you or jewel for killing him off though…but honestly, you made me cry…

Congratulations on the story! It was awesome, at the same time touching…

Alex, you hurt me feeling you call me fuck you, and done with you, now I crying and hitting myself in real life. ;( ;( ;(

P.s I love your story.

Now I have to crying forever! WWWWWHHHHHHHAAAAAAA! :,( :,( :,(

You made me cry! (starts crying) There should've at least been a antidote. At least Jewel still loves Blu.

Simply amazing!, I wonder how Linda would react if Tulio ever told her?

I enjoyed this little treats (Ha! Treats! Get it? Halloween and... oh never mind.) starting as a sweet story before you unleashed the dark side of the story (well, kind of)

I noticed a few spelling error such as Vines (Veins) and also some typo, but that's not really a big deal.
I also like the length with also the details you put, seems more vivid than usual, and keep doing this, lengthier better imaginary.

Lastly, about the plot, I have a slight issue about Jewel being the one who need to kill Blu. I mean, I know they wanted to talk for the last time, but should it be Tulio's job? Assuming that he is the "doctor" of Blu. I can't imagine a doctor just hand you a poison to kill your husband... it's a little odd.

Regardless, the chapter as a whole is amazing, have a plot, and solid execution, so I will expect you to do more of this new improvement.

Long review yet again...

Very sad and emotional story,I would be my lying if i say I didnt cry at the end,keep up the great work and remember to ingore all the haters:)