| Reviews for Of Mice and Jack |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2018 3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2018 How cute! |
KitoH chapter 3 . 10/16/2017 Yes Perfect Revenge |
Nemesis dan Impyrean chapter 3 . 10/25/2016 That's a side of Bunny I've never seen before. Cool! |
MagicWarriorDragon chapter 3 . 8/29/2016 I love this story! It is amazing. Thank you for writing it! |
Conan Shinichi Lover chapter 3 . 6/4/2016 I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I HAD A HUGE COUGHING FOR AFTERWORDS! YOU SHOULD MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Zyenna chapter 3 . 5/29/2016 This chapter was glorious! I loved how Bunny and Marie got over their differences. Pleeeeaaaaase update soon! |
Nick chapter 3 . 5/24/2016 Glad to see more chapters of this story hopefully there's more to come in the future keep up with the good work update soon please |
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 3 . 5/24/2016 I wonder what the Groundhog did though... very bonus chapter! |
GuestSun's Eye chapter 3 . 5/23/2016 I have no idea that your continuing "Of Mice and Jack"! Surprise Updates are always great, something to look forward to later in the day! This Chapter 3 reminds me of the other fanfics I've read about how other spirits and immortals view Jack as a Guardian, and before. I like the idea and image of the Guardians formal wear to the New Year's Party! Especially Queen Marie's outfit, it's ADORABLE, and elegant, Love the Picture in AO3! The reaction from the crowd and the party, even the snobby character Humphrey Goldleaf. I like it, man even that jerk Humphrey bind Jack to thorny vines, one of the scenarios I keep reading about Jack being picked on and looked down on. At least Bunny, and Marie, as well as her fairy mice court teach the jerk a lesson, by tying him up with magical thread and throw him out into the snow. Jack's right, wondering if maybe the world was better off with them not getting along, but at least they bond about protecting Jack from jerks like Humphrey. I can't wait for "Offerings of Spring" and "Of Mice and Jack" Good Luck, Keep Writing! -Sun's Eye |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2016 Oh, LOL, That is so cute and what a great way to end Bunny's and Marie's conflict. You've out done yourself! |
Sparky chapter 3 . 5/22/2016 What is the story behind The Groundhog anyway? I've always wanted to know, haha. This was super cute, and I'm glad you made it. I really liked the idea of Marie, and Bunny working with her was perfect! |
LunarCatNinja chapter 3 . 5/22/2016 Ha! I love it! Poor... Any spirits that annoyed Bunny and Queen Marie. X3 |
AyameKitsune chapter 3 . 5/22/2016 Epic! I adore Marie. Is there going to be more of this? |
LuffyxRuby chapter 3 . 5/22/2016 What Bunny and Marie did to humfrey was hilarious! |