| Reviews for Snape-chat |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 7/14/2019 Snucius : 3 |
 mandancie chapter 4 . 4/5/2016 yes, I agree. I think we all needed a little laughter. Thank you so much for writing this. :D |
| mandancie chapter 3 . 1/28/2016 this was really cute. Something to bring smiles to everyone face. :D |
| mandancie chapter 2 . 12/18/2015 I hope all is well with you, sweetie. I loved what you did here. I hope you do a second part to it. not saying that it has to be saccharine sweet or anything, but everyone needs to know the truth about each other. Severus may attempt it again, but will he feel the love around him or will he believe he is still unloved. |
| silviasiddiqui chapter 2 . 12/18/2015 HI! Wow, that was sad. BUT, well-written. I loved it! ~LIbb23 |
| silviasiddiqui chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 Hi! Wow, this was really well-written and interesting, I loved the twist at the end! Libb23 |
| mandancie chapter 1 . 10/31/2015 oh wow! this was really good. |
| Sleeping Dreamer4 chapter 1 . 10/30/2015 I'll only touch on the major aspects I've noticed. It was a good effort but needed a bit more refining. Punctuation was lacking to make dialogue easier to read, you had a few dialogue with a question mark but not asked as a tag, capitalization was spotty, and you didn't catch repeating yourself like He didn't comment, he didn't loom, but he didn't say anything. Unless you meant to type something else, didn't comment on and say anything is the same thing. Varying words like mess up repeated a few times would help. In terms of plot and diction, plot was okay but you could have tried to rise the vocabulary slightly. |
