Reviews for Loss of Time
lil joker 1989 chapter 12 . 7/1/2018
This was a really sweet story. I love a young Bruce. He was so open and vulnerable.
Ma chapter 9 . 6/2/2018
i love bruce
StormLover chapter 12 . 5/25/2018
Wow. I absolutely loved this one. The rollercoaster ride was a bit harrowing at times but very enjoyable. I appreciated the slow build the emotional confessions at the end. Thank you for sharing your work. I will be definitely reading more of your stories.
Dannee87 chapter 12 . 6/1/2017
So cute... I absolutely love your stories... I'm so happing with this ending :) Thank you thank you thank you
angellovsyaoi chapter 12 . 1/16/2016
just how I wanted it to end. So sweet they finally admitted they're feelings!
Yaoishoujo chapter 12 . 1/16/2016
So cute! ;3; I melted. Damn these female hormones! :P I liked how you kept the situation in perspective, especially regarding Bruce's change in attitude. If I were Clark, I'd be confused and upset at how "ooc" my friend was acting, too. I feel for Bruce, though, cuz he has no idea how to handle true and honest love. He's only "dated" and had sex with many women (or in this case, people in general, since he's publicly bi) with no attachments, strings, or commitments. I also know how Clark feels in his reservations for giving his heart to someone with a reputation such as Bruce's. He could get hurt easily and that's a scary prospect. Bruce has A LOT of proving to do, which of course he'll be okay with, considering he's... BAT-shit crazy in love with Kal. ;D Sorry, couldn't help it.

The only "off" part, at least to me, was when Bruce was being overly romantic. It was sweet and, trust me, reading it made me melt. But the waffiness seemed a bit too ooc. Also, why did Bruce wanna cuddle before confirming anything? Was he throwing hints that he remembered everything while he was de-aged? Was he overly confident? It just seemed very un-Bruce-like. However, I also took into account that there's a possibility that a piece of him while he was de-aged stayed inside him when he returned to normal. It'd be the "cuddly, clingy, love me, hold me, take care of me" side that his four year old side had. Or perhaps he realizes that doing so will make Kal happy. Either way, it doesn't really matter in the long run. The story was great. :)

Thank you for writing it! I enjoyed reading every chapter and the ending was quite satisfying. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna fall asleep to the thought of them "snuggling" in the bedroom. ;)
angellovsyaoi chapter 11 . 1/11/2016
I love this so much. I can't wait for your next update. Please continue on
Yaoishoujo chapter 11 . 1/8/2016
Oh, hun, I'm so sorry about your grandpa. I know how it feels to lose a treasured family member. You really didn't have to worry about updating the fic on time. I sure as hell would have understood why. Healing your emotions is far more important than sticking to a fic schedule. Try to remember that, okay? If you need more time, I beg of you, please don't worry about the next chapter. Take ALL the time you need.

Btw, I really liked this chapter and I'm glad you're not rushing things now that Bruce is back to normal. You're keeping everyone in character, which is great. :) Gotta love Bruce being... Bruce. So stubborn and irritating. Haha. Would love to know what Bruce was gonna say both those times, but I'm sure it'll be revealed later. Hang in there, Kal!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/8/2016
I love the story so far it never fails to amaze me :) I'm very sorry what happened to your grandfather, believe me I too went through it when my own had passed away as well. It was really tough on us especialy on my grandmother, she loved him very dearly and he also loved her back. My grandmother told the family that his last words to her were "your my wife, I love you" and that was it, I believe his last memory was his wife and their children instead of the pain he had endured these pass years. I believe your grandfather's last memory was his family instead of the pain. I apologize if I was too personal, but take your time and heal :)
oi tudo bem chapter 11 . 1/8/2016
EU AMO suas historias! Você é incrível! Sinto muito por seu avô e por ter preguiça de escrever em inglês, maaas é a vida...ficar escrevendo em uma língua que você nem terminou o curso é meio foda...Enfim parabéns!
bjsss
Guest chapter 10 . 1/7/2016
Aaahhhhwwww! I haven't freaked out over cuteness in a LONG time and it was gloriouse! X) plz update! .
Mireilles3 chapter 9 . 12/29/2015
Eh eh eh, of course B figured it out :) I wonder what he will do with that information now :)

More soon, please :)
Guest chapter 8 . 12/27/2015
Oh no! Clark! Just when he and B reconciled!

Reqding in!
Lascka chapter 9 . 12/25/2015
Very good story. Bruce is very smart, maybe too much for a four years old, but you made it okay. You balance the childlish Bruce and the one who understand too much for his own good very well.

Ah ah ! Cat's out the bag ! I don't think Clark will be able to lie to Bruce this time. I'm impatient to read the rest !

Happy Christmas and new year to you and your family !

Bye !
Morbid Humour chapter 7 . 12/11/2015
Wow, i have to say this chapter was amazing. I love this so much! It was really crazy and all, Superman aka Clark being a big meanie how dare he say no to poor baby Bruce .
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