I am going to assume the very first sentence of this story is meant to tell us the main thing you changed ;)

I've read both chapters and so far this version of the story and it looks like an improvement, so I encourage you to continue. Although I hope you're not planning for that deliberate "sticking to the script" to last very long...

Does SSS mean Some Serious Shit? Lol, wish this'll be updated soon. I quite like it so far.

...Why exactly is this dead? I know you're working on Essence right now, but this has so much potential...

You're not continuing this, huh? Well, that's too bad, I like time travel stories.

Off to an awesome start! I really enjoyed those first chapters! Please pick this project back up in the future if you can! Looking forward to see how this would play out! :)

quick question about yoyr AN, would the A Different Path fic that you were referring to be the SAO crossover or a different one?

Good luck shirou

Interesting start

If you ever take this again for a spin, slow down the pacing somewhat. Its not really doing you many favors to hit the gas pedal and leave it floored.

Wait wait wait... there's a fanfic out there where Shirou is a TYPE!? ... I can't find it on the title alone, and I doubt that Sword Art Online crossover fic is the one, so can you PM me the link?

Holy shit... Wow, just wow about Shirou's completely different approach than the Revenant Sword. Will Shirou also disclose his time-travelling to other potential allies like Sakura?

Very very interesting!

Oh this is story has very captured my attention and I eagerly look forward to the next parts! Thank you for your hard work and sharing it with us!

Nice, can't wait for the update.

nice and if this is a twisted version of heaven's feel then yes Shirou you will have betrayed everything you believe in honestly the HF route was by far the darkest most twisted of all three but if your going with the Saber pairing still then maybe there's some form of hope for him looking forward to more