*waves* love everything update soon please

Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon!

Thank you for all of this fluff! I'm really adoring the dynamic here and am looking forward to our favorite couple getting married.

Lol I love this story it keeps me interested and I can't wait for you to write more.

First of all, thank you so much for these speedy updates. Second of all, I absolutely love the edition of Orochi! You have such a fun mix of humor within the universe you've created but doing it in a way that doesn't disrupt the main storyline. Sayu is a Mary-sue in the broadest sense, but you've made her so fun to read about. And I know this is a Law OC fic and I'm all onboard the ship, but I can't help but love the Ace action as well lol. I look forward to every update. Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us.

This is by far the best Law FanFiction that I have ever read. I just binged this whole story and it just keeps getting better and better. I love how there are serious moments as well as humourous moments as well. The fact that Law was the first to realise his feelings and how frustrated he gets from Sayu's obliviousness is amazing. Wonderful story and i am looking forward to your next update.

Love this fic. I have fun reading this. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Lol good chap

interesting

I reallllly love this fic. I live for this fic. I want to see where else this fic can goooo! Though it's a bit sad that there won't be as much cute moments of Sayu, since she has instantly grown to be 18 y.o. and all. Bit i stil lenjoy it nonetheless. If you have watched the already the Minks/Zou Arc. Then you should probably start on thinking on how to get more of the actual crewmates for Law besides the extra OC's that i see you used besides .&.Bepo. Hopefully you get to add Jean Bart in the actual crew in the near future at the Sabaody arc. By this time in the chaps don't forget to add more actual time frame of how Luffy and Co. are doing either by newspapers or rumour talks in the bars. XD

Omg I love this! Please update soon!

Damn so much stuff is going down and the heart pirates are all separated! Can't wait to see how each party reacts and what happens to each of them.

Also, I wonder if Adit is eventually gonna become a heart pirate though really he's got a looong way to go if he wants to. But then again thinking of him becoming just a normal "commoner" citizen will be hard work for him as well...he's gonna have to learn about working and laboring for money/food/shelter. The current money he has won't last forever so yea unless he wants to become dirt poor he'll have to learn about hard work.

I've been sucked into this story. I'm really enjoying it. I was wondering about Sayu's age and you've put an interesting twist in getting her to age. I also love how they've met the strawhats. I'm really looking forward to seeing how things play out. You've really created a fun crew within the heart pirates.

I really want Sayu to meet Hidan one day

love the story! more chapters please!