MY HEART...
Man whyyy did you end if like that .Can we have a epilouge at least I just wish I knew that they were going to be only read 2 billdip fanfics that I have adored the way that the author has portrayed them and you are one of them so I want a nice ending

I loved this I don't know why the hell you consider this trashy but lemme say it's amazing!

you practically ripped my heart out and ate it right in front of the past two chapters.

This book was AMAZING! I loved it so much! There is this one thing about it though... you do know that “thank you” is two words, right?

Why did u stop?! This story is awesome!

If you think this is bad I wanna see what your best work is. This stuff is downright amazing!

Wow. This was wonderful and I'm so glad I read it! However, if this is finished, I suggest marking it as complete, because otherwise it still looks like its on going. But really, this was amazing! I'm glad I read it. :)

I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for: Mindscape, for having to deal with Mabel, or Dipper, for having to deal with Mabel's commentary. I couldn't stop laughing!

Awwwww so dang adorable... why did it have to end..? :'(

YES

Bill is perfect

super awesome. I really like the story keep up the good work!

I feel as though there should be a sequel of his return

Poor children. R.I.P. Well, that was a fun adventure. A shame it's over but all good things must end.

Good luck with life and writing other amazing things!

oH MY GOD MY FUCKING HEART-

Aaawww...short but sweet. Glad you came back to this and finished. I enjoyed your story!